Reviews for Damage
child of Jon snow chapter 1 . 1/7/2015
My throt closed up ples tell me is prowl going to make it out alive please
Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
Simple, terse, and moving. Sometimes, although perhaps only in conjunction with real tragedy, the best fiction comes from real life. I am deeply sorry for the loss to you, if not total, of your grandmother.
Carlough chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
This is extremely heart-wrenching and well-written. It immediately made me think of people with disabilities, some who are unable to communicate with the outside world and thus become extremely angry that nobody can understand them. As soon as Blue mentioned that Prowl might be angry with them, I couldn't help but think of that. Again, a lovely story.
Dragonrider2203 chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Wow, this is a really good idea. It would be brilliant if you could continue it. Maybe Prowl could have a long recovery and Jazz and Bluestreak need to help him, or that he recovers but isn't the same and needs help coping. Anyway, loved it!
Yami-Yugi3 chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Too bad this is a one shot. I feel sorry for Prowl. -_-
Rio Voltaire chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
D Sadface...

I don't like strokes...both my grandad's died from strokes...

Still love your stories though, beautiful writings :)