Reviews for Unforgivable
uppitymary chapter 2 . 2/26/2011
I love this story! You're great at describing the tension between Addison and Mark. Please update soon! Maddison forever ;)
Chanel5 chapter 2 . 12/7/2010
Lately I have realised how much I miss Maddison. I really like this story and hope you continue it. Very well written. I have always been a fan of Mark, Addison and Derek Pre Seattle.

Tiva4evaxxx chapter 2 . 10/21/2010
Oh this is a bit intense too.

I love the description of how mark picks up the girl.

And how he's imagining he's with Addison, even though it's so wrong.

And Addison and Derek... aha. Brilliant description of their night together there.

And i love how they both lie to each other in the morning, brilliant :')

SOrry... short again...

but i do love it... it will be better next time!

love you
Tiva4evaxxx chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
I love Adrienne :')

And this, in general.

I love the Mark/Addison tension.

It is wonderful.

And i love that she hides in a supply cupboard :L Ah. I love it.

And i love the long paragraph.

I love all of it, to be honest.


It's so intense.

And this review is short, because my head is hurting more.


But i really do love this :P
dizzy - in - the - izzy chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
Still don't know what is going on, it's still really good. :)
kateswalshs chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
Aw, i love your take on this so far! :)
sively chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
i like that you give us both addison's and marks's POV in just one chapter.

Adrienne is your own crearion but she doesnt seem too mary sue, which is good :)

mark and addison both know what they feel for each other is WRONG, but they just cant help it, they are drawn to each other.. I like that part where you mention derek and mark being competitive w/ each other when it came to women, but that derek had already won because it had addison. It reminds me of what addison once told mark oon canon- about mark not wanting to raise a child but wanting to trump derek, wanting to win.. It certainly makes sense provided with your backstory.

Great start, i'm liking this and intrigued about where youre gonna take it :)

mark and addison will always be my OTP :)
Juni chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
I hardly read stories that are not MerDer, but your summary drove me in. I have a soft spot for Maddison too. This first chapter was good, keep up !
AmyHale chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
wow I have no words, I can't wait for the other chapters :)
Paracosm chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
I enjoyed this. I like Maddison and it is especially interesting to read about the New York days.
dizzy - in - the - izzy chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Because you gave me not just two, but THREE *gasps here* reviews, I thought I'd go review what you've written.

Good good job. I have no clue who these people are, but I shall go look up pictures and shit of them so as I am not totally confused. You know. :P

I thought the writing was great and the UST was good. :P Yeah, unresolved sexual tension here. I can feel it!

anywho, I need to get back to my homework. I have pysch homework. YAY for terms! :P
InAFantasyWorld chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
I LOVE MADDISON! :) woah ssorry didn't know it was on capslock lol update asap
skycloud86 chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
I've never actually seen GA but this was great.