|Reviews for Cruelty|
| sparkling apples chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
Such wonderful narrative. xD
| Strawberry Scented Paperclip chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
This was really well written. I think you wrote out Ryoji's feelings perfectly. I honestly felt really bad for him when he confessed his love even though he knew they couldn't be together. I dislike the fact that the MC died at the end, but I take comfort in the fact that she might just spend eternity with him. At least she gets to be with someone instead of being alone, since she'll be guarding him from now on / Unless Theodore breaks her out of that seal like he wanted to...
Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this :D
| Raven236 chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
I have never really thought of the Nyx avatar like that.. before.
You conveyed his feelings well.
| FrizFr0z chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
as with the previous poster, I always enjoy reading your Persona stories! Even though most of them do not have multiple chapters, they all convey more emotion than many other writers for the SMT series. The plot is unique, the English flawless; you somehow have a way with finding the perfect ending to wrap up the rest of the story as well. Bravo!
| Yukai yami chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
I cried. I did.
Beautifuly written. Loved every bit of it.
Man, I love every single fanfic you make for p3p. U have a real talent 4 em! I can't wait for another story from Richii's world! :D