Reviews for Day Break
tamwhit chapter 4 . 2/24
Please update your story soon as I would like to know what happens next
ftj chapter 4 . 7/24/2015
interesting story, please continue. will bella be with eric?
Befeatherlike chapter 3 . 4/20/2014
You have a great idea for a story :) try not to have too much dialogue
fart man chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
Loved it
Marine76 chapter 4 . 11/11/2013
I really like your story. Please update soon.
Marine76 chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Good start !
wendy1969 chapter 4 . 7/9/2013
sounds different and interesting
Justin chapter 4 . 6/26/2013
One thing that irks me is the fact that the rules allotted for the va,pores are different...Edward can read minds and is vampire bill can't but spookier can and she's fairy. Then the fact that Bella doesn't know about the world wide outta of vampires would be a huge deal. Not just oh yeah whatever I'm sure th Cullen's would have mention it. Over all I liked it. It seemed hard to work with cuz the rules are different for the 2
lovingaunt2012 chapter 4 . 4/23/2013
Cant wait for more!
Bella4evr3 chapter 4 . 2/23/2013
Really great so far. I hope bella gets with Eric. It would make the story so much better. Cant wait for the next chapter
cosmoGirl666 chapter 3 . 1/25/2012
Hope you continue! :)
stina222 chapter 3 . 10/27/2011
Pleeeease make this a Godric/Bella story! I love that pairing. Your story is really good so far. Please update soon!
BeckaR chapter 3 . 10/24/2011
Awesome story really love it and cant wait for more please
vampiregurly08 chapter 3 . 8/11/2011
oh please continue i love it
ShoshonaTheRose chapter 2 . 7/26/2011
Pretty good so far! For some reason I couldn't just review the last chapter but oh well! Please update soon and can Sookie read Bella's mind and can a real camp see her scar from James?
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