|Reviews for Age Is But A Number|
| Inspyre chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
That was awesome! I think we needed something to fill that gap ;)
| Janus Girl chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
very very nice! i love how you capture the character traits of both Walter and Ashley. you definitely have talent!
| Cammie Cassia Chase chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Love it. I absolutely love it.
| MissyMarauderette chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
Ah, chivalry. :) Thanks for filling in a missing scene!
I sometimes feel like Davis skips over anything tmwith too much romance. This really has the same feel as the book, too! You could stick it in there, and I'd never know an entirely different person wrote it!
Great job. :)
| yunabesaid chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
Wow! This is SOO in-character! This is really well done! Good job! I thought it was really cute when Walter called Ashley Ash.
(I know this isn't about them, but I always sign that)
God bless you!
| DragonQuill6913 chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Aaaawwww! DragonQuill likes!
| KyasarinJakkusan chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Dude, you got a review from Bryan Davis himself! That's cool!
Anyways, on topic: you did an amazing job, and you kept them totally in-character. I just finished reading The Bones of Makaidos finally, after having everything tear me away from it, and I honestly wished that there had been more info on what exactly happened in the 4-year time skip. You just fulfilled a bit of that wish, so thank you!
| ILoveGnomes chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
I always thought Walter and Ashley should end up together, but it is a bit sudden in the book, and you're story just a great job of showing the reading how and why their relationship finally changed. Great Job :)
| King Caspian the Seafarer chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Mwaha...okay, I'll have to admit that I didn't read BoM because I knew...well, that the situation between Walter and Ashley was going to change. This is sweet, though. Maybe I'll have to read it now.
You got both the characters down pat. Ashley's "Don't let your brain choke" is obviously very characteristic, and Walter was absentminded and amusing as ever. "Oh, right, the life-saving thing." So like him. :) Great job!
| Dovewings.of.Narnia chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
I loved this! Ashley and Walter both seemed very in-character, and I could totally see it happening! I also wished this scene was in TBoM, so I'm super happy to see it here! :) Great job!
| Outlaw's Daughter chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Aww :) Really cute! Walter & Ashley are great.
| Clefspeare chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Well done. I enjoyed it. It evoked genuine emotions and kept Walter and Ashley in character.
I could have written a hundred stories that occurred in that four-year gap, but the book was already over 600 pages long.
Thank you for filling in one of the gaps. :-)
Bryan Davis, author of The Bones of Makaidos