Reviews for Captive Hearts
annoyedbunny64 chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
You did awsome. I love it. You captured the characters amzaingly.
Shingekyo chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
Joker is so hot in this story my god
BrokenBlackCat chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
I love it :D You should do a sequel!
xxxPureRosexxx chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Very good story I really enjoy this one its interesting and exciting to read I liked it
AngelloDream chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
r u going to continue? o.O
horsewhisper3 chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Cherry Goth chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
This is so far the best Joker/Alice story I've read, well done! . I don't know much (specifically) about Joker, but this seems like the best way to describe him if he had real romantic feelings for Alice (again, I wouldn't really know

-) Great job, keep it up! XD
zerOtodona chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
God, I'd love to see another part to this story
nebhat04 chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
After you reviewed my story, I was so curious about your writing style and stories so I picked this out and read it. I was amazed how you described the surroundings and how you choose your words. I really enjoyed reading it. Im not so familiar with Alice in Wonderland (the manga) but you made me feel the urge to read it :D

Thanks for the review earlier ;)
Spicy Diamond chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Ooh, very nice creepy Joker. I love the tension you've created in this with Alice always seeming to be several steps behind as the forest and prison fade in and out.
XBlakkuX chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Yay! This was so awesome, even though I prefer Peter X Alice fan fictions... But this is awesome too! It's great, it's great! continue to make more chapters and I will read them! ;D
Ink'n'Echo chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Woah Joker and ALice! I like it! I especially love the line "If what I'm feeling now is a sin, then punish me by kisses. If what I'm feeling now is a crime, then I want to be your victim."

So cool its awesome and Joker still retains the sense of danger, Sweeet!
Sound of Nothing chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Wow. I don't normally review stories I actually like (I prefer giving constructive criticism), but I am being 110% truthful when I say you are one of my favorite writers for the HnKnA community. I've read some of your other works as well, but this one struck me because a) it's about my absolute favorite character and b) his characterization was near perfect. Your other stories, Black and White and Rara Avis, I felt that his characterization was top notch as well, although a tad bit restrained. This story captures his personality perfectly though, I think.

Anyway, I believe the "dark" theme quite suits you whether you think you're good at it or not. Keep up the good work!
Silver Star Tea chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
ohohoho i know how shed punish him (**)

you cannot imagine the pervy face i had when they kissed ()
pasty face chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Awesome! I loved it!
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