Reviews for Substitute
kinsley5 chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
Powerful. Raw. I like this a lot. I like the different sides you show of Kaidan, the charm and the desperation.
Swann Hunter chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
Glad you gave some depth to this understated character. Writing from her perspective is a good choice; the uncertainty of Kaidan's feelings during this time adds a lot to the story.
Natalie Parr chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
I liked this, too. Very well written. I liked the way you used one of Shepard's endorsements as something that he saw while wandering through the citadel. Sad and touching.
girl undone chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
I really liked this story. It's such a nice change of pace from the generic evil/boring/somehow-sinister phantom doctor whom Kaidan had drinks with on the Citadel. I could never understand slandering her. It was great to read something from her perspective. Thanks!