|Reviews for FATE: Holy Grail War of 2814|
| Anon chapter 6 . 9/17/2010
As usual, a great chapter. Things are moving along nicely and getting really interesting.
One thing I should mention. When Rider said that Perseus was 'a Shinji who succeeded', she didn't mean that he was an asshole like Shinji, she meant that both Shinji and Perseus were manipulated by people, Shinji by Zouken and Perseus by the Greek gods. Except Shinji was garbage and Perseus actually made something of himself. Rider herself in that scene said she didn't hate him and even pitied him for what he went through, but was mad that he was running around with her head.
Inany case, keep up the great work please!
| Gundum M chapter 6 . 9/17/2010
well that can't be good
| noone chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
I can see it now; Kuro being told that she is basicly what a chiled of Shiro and Illya would be; when archers true name is reveld. Well...that and Shiro be comes a smart badass! "What! He has sex with Rin! , but not me!" said Luviagelita. It's true as far as I know. Well he scores with Sakura,the archery captin at their school, and saber to. Luviagelita is going to be pissed that he is having sex with just about evey girl, BUT her.
| Lazarus Drake chapter 5 . 9/14/2010
I admit that Shiro is as dense as they come (like most boys his age, really, especially if they fall under the Chaste Hero label) and optimist to a fault unless motivated otherwise; however, he tends to listen to his gut feelings, which makes him a pretty good judge of character. Hell, he deemed LANCER as trustworthy after being stabbed through the heart (not even having the basic decency to die when he was killed...) by the guy, threatened with grievous bodily harm, and had to watch said Servant hitting on his love interest:D
The problem with his gut feelings is that, when confronted with Shinji, he pegged him as "just your average Joe, has problems socializing". Which is completely accurate. The problem was that, the difference between "average Joe" and "complete monster bent on crossing every moral event horizon imaginable" is incredibly small. I have a few jerkass friends myself and I don't think less of them just for that. Of course, if I suddenly learned that one of them is the heir to a clan of magi, was passed over in favor of his adopted sister AND has a grandfather that gives me the creeps just by greeting me I'd watch the guy a lot more closely:D
Of course, everything I said falls under Alternate Character Interpretation and lacks comedic value, so it would have no place in this kind of fic. I just felt I should point some things out.
| Gundum M chapter 5 . 9/13/2010
love kuro in this chapter. although she really dosn't strike me as a jim butcher fan
| bissek chapter 5 . 9/13/2010
I hope Sakura gets out of the house before Rin starts her 'kill all Matous' campaign.
I can't see Dresden as Assassin. It just doesn't fit him. If you want a real literary Assassin of legend, try Durzo Blint (Of course, he'd find the title of Assassin to be insulting. He's a deadboy. Assassins have targets because they sometimes miss. Deadboys have deaders, because what is left of their life is a mere formality).
| Ryuus2 chapter 5 . 9/13/2010
Hello. I am ClovisNeo, the sane, analytical split-personality of Ryuus2. Ryuus is currently unavailable, as he has slipt into a catatonic state similar to a Smilex gas victim after reading this update. He sends his regards as to the incredible levels of awesome you have managed to generate with this chapter. By the way, props on the badass boast; 'Before I sic my polka-powered Zombie Tyrannosaurus Rex on you,' indeed. Actually, would that be more of a threat than a boast?
He also sends his thanks as to the recomendation of the story 'Fifty Four Negi and Chisame Threesomes' by OverMaster. Heenjoyed it and OverMaster's other works greatly, especially 'Unequally Rational and Emotional.'
I recall Ryuus wondering when you'd get around to writing Harry Dresden in action. Parodied in 'Akanema,' second-slotted in 'When Wizards Meet,' and both second-slotted and parodied in 'Erebea Molly' were just not cutting it for him. He was just recently contemplating how you could work Mr. Dresden intothis series, and was ecstatic at reading his introduction here. And then he rered it a few times before entering his current,as stated, smilex-like catatonic state.
That is all. As my more interesting half would say:
'Keep up the awesomely badass work! Dude!'
| Jack Inqu chapter 5 . 9/13/2010
Servants Gaius Tavarus Magnus and Harry Blackstone Copperfield Dresden?
...oh, f*** that noise. Everyone get in the car, we're leaving. Seriously, no way would I fight those two alone, let alone together. The other Servants should probably be grateful Kitai and Murphy didn't show up as well.
Can't wait to see how this goes.
| PersonaJXT chapter 5 . 9/13/2010
Lol, what? Jim Butcher servants? In this xover-fest?
| bissek chapter 4 . 9/12/2010
The 'vacation curse' is TvTroped. It's called the Busman's Holiday. I can't believe you missed that.
| Tsukino Kage Spectre chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
You know, while entertaining, I was hoping you would include more stories based on DC animated episodes and comics and how Nanoha and Co can change things there. Just Nanoha becoming GL instead of Jordan, Raynor or Stewart changes a lot of things. After the A's ark and this side fanfic is done, can we see more of Justice League?
On another note, Batman seems a poor fit for Berserker. Berserkers are supposed to be completely crazy and mindless, but Batman's greatest weapon is his mind, and thus this negates his greatest asset. He doesn't fight with spear, sword, magic spells, or arrows so Lancer, Saber, Caster and Archer are out (unless you count Batarangs as a possible Archer-style weapon). His methods with stealth and planning make him more of an Assasin despite his refusal to kill, like that Assasin from Fate/Extra, and his use of the Batmobile or Batplane can make him a Rider.
Best fit in personality seems more like a Saver (not Saber, check Fate/Extra for this class) and his motivations seem more like Avenger (the vengeance obsessed servant found in Fate/Hollow Ataraxia).
| Ryuus2 chapter 4 . 9/11/2010
Meido Hawkgirl. I wonder if that would be more or les peverse than Setsuna-Cosplayer Hawkgirl?
I just realized...Keeper would go on a fangirl (because there would be way too much 'spuee-ing' for a fanboy) rampage throughout this world getting 'souvenirs,' autographs, and DNA samples. Or he'd slip into a coma from the win that is this world.
Batman and Berserker. Great minds think alike.
...Note to self: have Kazumi ask Sayo if she's ever peeked in the boys locker room. Chances are slim she has, but the reaction will be worth it.
Keep up the great work!
| Twilight-Destruction chapter 4 . 9/11/2010
Woohoo - Saber's admittedly stylish suit from Fate/ZERO returns :D Waiting for a Superman v.s Gilgamesh scene in the future.
| Gundum M chapter 4 . 9/11/2010
great chapter. but the bit about Precia makes me think you time line might be a bit screwy
| Shadow Zeranion chapter 4 . 9/11/2010
Heh, so my suspicions on who the Fate/Zero Caster in this universe was right. Heh, Hayate as Servant Caster... I pity them all, especially since it looks like she is somehow still around. Then giving Sakura Reinforce? Nice touch to avoid all the stuff Shinji and Zouken want to put her through. I'm looking forward to seeing some action in the next chapter though. Also like the touch on how in an age of heroes you made it so Gilgamesh doesn't want to kill all humans quite yet, but instead might just want to conquer the world again and rebuild his kingdom and position as the King of Heroes. Or was that king of kings... Meh, whatever. Nonetheless great work!