|Reviews for Hotel Bar|
| Scarlett Valencia chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
told you I would read it...
Great story and if I ever wanted a lesbian story, I would ask you to write it! Overall, well done.
| The Lady of the Land chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
gah! this could've made SUCH a good ficlet, or story!
| SwanQueen4tw chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
very nice. good job.
| like-lemon chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
I love it! It's amazing.
| becp chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
hot very hot
| Lulu Lollipop chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
thats good i find it funny at the end i wonder what they do now? lol xo
| BrionnaRain14 chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
god that was so friggin awesome
| sydneytwilightmum chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
Nice... Midori Splice eh? that was my teenage cocktail of choice! haha!
Interesting way of Bella & Alice meeting each other. It was really cute and I think that there could be loads more to it, although it stands alone as a one shot.
I haven't been brave enough to go over into the / side of things so great job on the femme /
Thanks for sharing...
| KStewartAussie chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
That was hot
| forgotten22 chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
You did a great job. I really enjoyed it. And I liked the outfits too. This was a pretty hot o/s :) I would like to say however, the tense in the chapter kept changing from past to present and back and forth. (ex. her body erupts; Bella crawled back up. - erupts is present while crawled is past. its either erupts and crawls or erupted and crawled.) Just be careful on that. It can make it a little difficult to read. You did awesome otherwise! I really enjoyed it! :)
| shaz89 chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
love the story
| Anuka21 chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
It was pretty nice...You should totally do a sequel...
| bleach number 1 fan chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
haha nice fic i realy enjoyed reading it lol at the ending that would definitly lead to sum weird questions :D and i wish my dreams were half as graphic as that :D
| NikkiBXD chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
That was seriously hot! :)
Loved it! :D