|Reviews for Jalice: till death do us part|
| If.I.Die.Young chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
This is a good story! You should continue it! I can just imagine what there wedding would of looked like
| CHouseOfNightLover7 chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Hahah, aww, this story is so sweet
Anyway, the storyline is fine. The plot is new and interesting, I never thought of Alice's wedding before. Hah I guess my imagination is really weak(:
Okok, like I was saying I really like this story 8D I liked how you added bits of your own ideas. It's creative and cute, I've never heard Jasper call Alice Ally before.
However,some parts of the chapter are a bit...predicted. Like the part of Alice predicting his proposal. Maybe you could twist that one a little.:)
Hope this helps!