Reviews for So Tired of Waiting For You, My Dear
Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2015
It seems it's either stayne or the hatter that abuses alice. And the abuser (every time) has the same personality. With the hatter's supposed "love", i expected him to be more gentle and forgiving. He's just stayne in your other stories but with a different face and name. Why are all your bdsm characters the same? I guess the hatter is quite OOC in this because why tf would he humiliate and threaten the one he loves? All i see when i read this is you exercising the same boring bdsm bullshit just with a different guy. I was hoping for a more affectionate bdsm seeing as he "loves" her but i still got stayne. This really disapointed me. Especially how Alice has no free will and just takes it without trying to defend herself in the least. But of course she wouldn't. She "loves" him too. -_-
InmyInk chapter 5 . 10/8/2013
"she felt the warmth of his fluids spurting inside her!"
Oh! You really are a erotical girl to the bone and do participate to it. So this happened after you see the unfinished story of Burton, well done!
onecelestialbeing chapter 5 . 8/7/2011
LMAO! I missed the ending! Once again, I loved this!
onecelestialbeing chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Wow haha! I'd read this one awhile ago and never forgot image of Mally being pissed at the naked Alice tied to the tea table, didn't realize it was your story! I love this one as well :)
Paradisiacal chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
I read this once before; I liked it then, and I like it now. I always like it when Tarrant is in charge, when he's more experienced and teaching her - no matter what the lesson is.

You made me laugh with Mally: "'Ow am I supposed te eat my dinner?" Good job, pushing boundaries like this.
smiles2go chapter 5 . 10/20/2010
Completely erotic. I enjoyed it very much.
Anna Tyrell chapter 5 . 10/16/2010
Wow, that's such an awesome story! At first I was afraid, that Tarrant will remain dark,but it was such a "phew!" when you lightened him up! Loved it and hope that's not the end!)
Breannahello chapter 5 . 10/13/2010
I like it :D
Makrciana chapter 5 . 10/11/2010
I'm glad you've finished the story like that...really, now it feels like the circle is complete...

I enjoyed so much your story...I hope to read you again soon! _
Ngoc Chau chapter 5 . 10/11/2010
"Well, if that's the sort of gratitude I get for carrying the two of you all the way here then..."

I would feel like Prate if I gave them a ride and they yelled at me afterwards...


I'm so glad you updated and... wow...

I love Mally's reaction!

Question: do men/boys use... um... fingerplay... with their girlfriends during momentsof passion or do they usually learn and lean to do that afterwards, longer into the relationhip? Or do they have to be told what to do?
watergoddesskasey chapter 5 . 10/11/2010
awesome ending lol!
MaRaMa-TSG chapter 5 . 10/10/2010
Yes! Yes! This ending was just perfect! I was worrying you were gonna leave it in the last chapter. It could have been a nice ending, so funny and naughty, but still felt it needed more and you didn't disappoint! I have nothing to critique. It's wonderful as it is. Especially the very last bit with Mally! I did like how it was fluffier in this chapter. They'll be all loving and sweet but still as naughty as ever.
MorganaCraven chapter 4 . 10/6/2010
wow awesome story.

Mind Blowingly Erotic!

It would be nice to have a chapter 5 just to see the realization of Alice's last wish.

Please please oh please do make one more chapter!
Marvelous.Mirana.of.Marmoreal chapter 4 . 10/1/2010
I just love the last part! Plzzzz update soon?
Makrciana chapter 4 . 9/23/2010
Ohh! you don't show us the wedding, nor party, or wedding night? I think I'm a bit sad...I will miss your story :(

Well done anyway!
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