Reviews for Master of Discipline: Shopping Trip
Godric Kharg chapter 1 . 9/1/2014
Lol... Interesting!
Biblio388 chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
A nice break from the serious world of the original fic. This could definitely be considered a nightmare by some.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
please for the love of god make more like this so funny and good
Yu Narukami P4 chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
lol funny XD
Ninja Master chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
lol! Will there be longer stories?
Blazeb79 chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Lol funny little one shot ..
Ronniemac28 chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
just awsome!
Raj8 chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
nice and funny story
Hellsender chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Woah, nice take on if Minato ever had the Disciplinary Squad as his sekirei.
Kyrial Arthian chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Poor Benitsubasa. XD I still think she's the hottest of the group. 3
Elizander chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
Short, funny and cute. I love youre sense of humor. Poor Benisusaba XD.
A Reviewer chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Seeing as how Karasuba is probably my favorite character from Sekirei, her or Homura, this was pretty much my favorite Sekirei 'verse' to date. And yeah, I totally think you nailed the ending, by the by. Her character demands no less. Anyway, it was great to see, and if you ever work on more vignettes like this or even rework the end so you can do a/just decide to do a sequel, I'll be thrilled. In the mean time, this one was funny. Great stuff.

Dominikku-kun chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Awwww. Thats pretty funny. I enjoyed this one, please keep up the good work
KingOfTheKill chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Hehe. I love your sense of humor... and why do I love the way you portray Akizu, so much?
omegarulesall chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
lol this was very good. I loved how when minato left them alone chaos broke out. Keep up the great work.
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