|Reviews for Find Your Love|
| Ukchana chapter 16 . 4/22/2013
I hope there will be a sequel . . .
I'm not really surprised that Gin did all of that to get Rangiku and his daughter back. All he cares about it seems, is what he wants. It's hard to know what's going to happen now. Somehow I don't see how Akane could forgive Toshirou.
But the real question I think people should have been asking is (of course) when do Momo and Saifun get punished for their parts in duplicity? The latter probably was just doing her job, but it seems like she wanted Toshirou to know. To make him hurt? Or to help him out? Her motivations in this are more mysterious.
| Ukchana chapter 11 . 4/22/2013
Weird, definitely! If Gin has decided to come back, I'm not sure for what purpose. But as I recall (possibly mistakenly) wasn't he working against Aisen the whole time? Gaining his trust so he could finally kill him? So this should be very interesting . . .
| Ukchana chapter 10 . 4/22/2013
Aw so sad . . . It's disgusting what some people do (Aizen, Gin) to the ones who love them. It's a trauma that's really hard to break away from. I find it interesting to read a story where Matsumoto is still clinging so strongly to Gin, yet isn't an idiot. I really like that quality; many think that everyone thinks and feels the same thing all the time, and if anyone has feelings that are stupid, that means they are stupid. But that's ridiculous. Everyone feels things they know are foolish. I really appreciate that you included that depth of character for all the characters you write.
| Ukchana chapter 9 . 4/22/2013
Aw, no fight scene? I guess we'll find out later?
Really loving the very slow romance developing. Far more natural, but also far more interesting and seductive for the reader (IMO). Those who want instant passionate sex are usually still going through puberty, I've found. Once they grow a bit they see the value in taking one's time. :-p
I do wonder if Akane's outer form would look different in the Afterlife. After all if a few years is only a few moments, then she might not be ten anymore. Would she look younger? Like maybe five?
| Ukchana chapter 7 . 4/22/2013
Your story is really amazing, and you write very well.
I just wanted to point out one small flaw - in July, in Japan (Unless they are near Hokkaido) it is never "cool" or "slightly chilly" lol. Her outfit would certainly get stares (exposed shoulders, WHAT?) but not because it would be chilly. :-D
I can only speak from recent experience. A year in Japan, I'd say the most miserable time was summer. And their summer starts far earlier than ours. I was in Nagoya, nearby Oosaka and Kyotou if that helps any. It was so hot we could only go out at 2 am . . . and even then it was 78 degrees if you were lucky.
I'm really curious as to why Akane's reitsu feels demonic. A side-effect from Gin? I guess I'll read on to find out!
| btalover chapter 16 . 4/23/2012
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASSSSSSSSSSSE MAKE A SEQUAL! This is an AMAZING story! It would be such a shame to not have a sequal!
| Hichigo's Devoted Follower chapter 12 . 6/23/2011
I'm up to chapter 12 and...this story is FUCKIN AWESOME!
When you were in the point of Toshiro when Momo told him the paternity test said he was the father of Akane I was like what? Then it went on saying he needed to tell Rangiku what he did I was like hmmm...did Toshi get a little naughty and seduce her when she was drunk? But I remember it's Toshiro Hitsugaya captain of Squad 10 were talking about he would never do that, and then there's the case with Akane having multiple Gin traits(The creepy loathsome smile and his mind fucking-questions not to mention Gin's eye color)But then he explains the finger deal and I'm thinking "You little smart-ass". Also not to be mean or any thing but his Shikai release is stated as "RAIN OVER THE FROSTED HEAVENS, HYORIMARU!" and his Bankai is Daiguren Hyorimaru. Good luck on any more Bleach stories especialy Toshi/Giku stories.
| Lunar Iris chapter 16 . 12/27/2010
Wow! I can't believe that it's over. It was such an incredible story. I loved every bit. I wasn't expecting the ending until it came to me all of a sudden, but it totally made sense. Good writing. Good job. I just wish there was more to read. :)
| Tobi Torii chapter 16 . 12/11/2010
A beautifully written fic with a lot of thought and effort put into it. I really enjoyed reading this but I do kinda want more...*Grins sheepishly* Thank you for sharing this wonderful work of art and I hope that, maybe, you'll consider something like a sequel? .
| WolfboyJeff chapter 16 . 12/3/2010
I can't wait for more! I was on the edge of my seat through out the whole chapter. This by far is one of the best HitsuMatsu fanfics that I've read.
| Ice Prince Hitsugaya chapter 16 . 12/1/2010
Now this is really interesting, your Hitsugaya and Ichimaru fight was really good, it was very well written. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| sagitgirlth chapter 16 . 12/1/2010
I'm glad they're starting over again. Now I really want to see what'll happen next
| Nicky Eira chapter 16 . 12/1/2010
This was a great fic, and I enjoyed it, especially the complex emotions and marriage dynamics you've weaved through it. This is a great place to end, it left us with a lovely scene of both of them running out to fight for Akane (she was a brilliant and entertaining OC ] ) with their usual back-to-back partnership. I would love a continuation, though. Adding you to my alerts list in this hope
| sparklepinkpixie chapter 16 . 11/30/2010
That fight was awesome! :O
I'm so happy that they worked things out and they get to be together and that Gin got the heck beaten out him, but but I can't believe he got to Akane and they went away together.
Planning a sequel where they go to get her back? Or should I just make up my own ending where they get her back smack the crap out of Gin and just happen to have Momo with them and leave her with him when they leave then she and Gin can sit in a corner and mope about the people they love being happy together :D
Awesome story, such a good writer :)
| sparklepinkpixie chapter 15 . 11/30/2010
Grrr you do a really good job at making me hate Gin :P
I hope he get's what's coming to him in the next chapter!