Reviews for Love's Dying Determination
okieeiffel chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Very sweet! I've always imagined that Lily secretly wanted James all along. She just couldn't abide by his bullying of her best friend, you know? I enjoyed this because I can see James trying to let her go and Lily not being very happy about it. I thought it was adorable how you described how perfectly she fit with him, and that bit in the beginning about his nerve endings and he wondered how she couldn't feel. I was just thinking..of course she does. She's just not admitting it to you.

Anyway, very nicely done!