|Reviews for Starry Eyed Inside|
| Leah C. Drawn chapter 30 . 10/17
Now, Ill be honest. I read this fanfic some years ago and I quit like on chapter 10. I’ve never liked the huge culture around drinking and smoking there is, so I was reluctant to continue the story. This time around, I started off not remembering why I quit, and decided to persist once I’d recalled to see if I’d missed out. Now, I have to say I’m glad I did. This is a great story, my issues with some of the plot aside. Your character development was fantastic with Bella and Edward, and it was such a realistic ride to see them grow; her obsession with a cute boy and his flippancy with her. Then how time changed them. It still feels a little odd to me how independent they are for seventeen, eighteen year olds; where I’m from there’s no such thing as ‘I’m eighteen and I can do what I want’, so that was a little startling, but I understand it’s a culture thing. But you can feel how they’re ‘pretend mature’ in the beginning of the story and how they actually grow later. I had a great time reading this story; thank you.
| Guest chapter 31 . 10/7
Good read and well written. Thanks for sharing.
| Lulutbo chapter 31 . 9/21
So, like other stories that are just amazing, this story kept popping up but I’d pass it over thinking I don’t want to read a HS fic...shame on me! Always trust the reviews...loved this story and completely bummed that I am not finished! It would make my day if you did a future take of them down the road, hint, hint really enjoyed this story! Thanks for sharing!
| storiesrmyjam chapter 31 . 9/8
This got me tearin up like nostalgia is unreal and how u mad this story evolve is just amazing.I love how the both of them didn't have a "perfect relationship" but loved each other no matter what and I loved how bella dated garret instead of waiting for E closeness and friendship and memories in this story is amazing and so beautiful, it just got me starry eyed inside.
| SoCalTwiNurse chapter 30 . 8/21
This futuretake was everything! Ending perfectly again! They're both still young & in college so I love that instead of a proposal, it's more of a promise. So much more realistic than other fics. It was hard reading about their fight but as always it was just the right amount of angst for this story/futuretake.
The promise ring... Bella thinking back & knowing she'd make that kind of promise every single year after she met him & then realizing she's not meant to ever get over hime (I know the feeling lol)...it's the sweetest thing! I can't believe this really is the end. I've loved every single chapter...like I said previously, you are amazing!
| SoCalTwiNurse chapter 29 . 8/21
GAH! Thank you for the EPOV! I always love getting into Edward's head but especially your Edward. That last line..."What an understatement. I loved her." *swoon*
| SoCalTwiNurse chapter 28 . 8/21
Awwww what a beautiful story! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed every chapter but I was so enthralled that I just kept going to the next chapter, then the next chapter, etc. I had a hard time with Bella moving on and losing her virginity to Garrett but it made sense for this story. E & B both had to be on their own for awhile Younger Edward was so mysterious & flirty and older Edward was so much more mature and sexy...great character development! I really loved that he came back only to realize how much he missed & loved Bella. And Bella's reaction to Edward when he came back...she couldn't deny that those old feelings were very much real and hard to move on from. I really hope it is a forever love for them...I think it will be. There's more chapters to go...I hope it's an epilogue!
Thanks for such a fantastic story...you're an amazing writer. I've been reading fanfic for so long that I'm still surprised when there are so many epic stories out there that I still haven't read like this one. It brought back all those nostalgic high school memories...the good & bad. I'm so sad this is over but you ended it perfectly!
| SoCalTwiNurse chapter 3 . 8/20
OMG! Such a great first kiss! I don't know if Edward really likes Bella or if he just figured out she likes him & he's kinda drunk & a little high... Anyway, another great chapter!
I don't really remember mine sadly...
| SoCalTwiNurse chapter 2 . 8/20
I always read on my Kindle but I had to come here to review...I'm loving this fic so far because it's SO high school...in a good way! Instead of being annoyed with HS Edward & Bella as one sometimes is with certain fics, all I'm feeling is nostalgia. Onto the next chapter!
| Make A Choice chapter 31 . 8/19
Love love love this story! Would love to see a one shot of Rose and Emmett when they were fighting!
So happy I had the opportunity to read it. Thank you
| insomniacinsanity chapter 30 . 8/17
I've just gotta say - thank you for such a beautiful ride! Weirdly I feel like parts of Bella's life (especially her journey with Garrett) are mirroring my own, and so I guess it's nice to see the words written down. Makes me feel less crazy. I really fell for this story, so thanks again :)
| Jesstew chapter 31 . 8/5
| Jesstew chapter 6 . 8/2
It's weird because they don't even talk. I have no idea how is Edward's personality ... there's no dialogues and that's kinda boring.
| Navya Agarwal chapter 31 . 6/22
I love sooooo much. This is one brilliant piece of work. like really, the best ExB book I've ever read. Thank you so very much for writing this book.
| karunakannu1999 chapter 30 . 3/18
Loved the story.
One of my favorite stories.