Reviews for Starry Eyed Inside
breakawaygirl chapter 5 . 9/22/2010
I love that this Bella is good at playing it cool. But I keep cringing, waiting for the other shoe to drop. I mean, Edward's 2 grades ahead of her, right? I don't know, just remmebering how douchey teenage boys can be, I have a feeling he's going to blow her off at some point and it's going to really hurt her. I keep wondering how far you're going to take, all the way through high school and into adulthood or not that far at all? I'm a nosy bitch. LOL
IluvSpunk chapter 5 . 9/22/2010
Wonderful chapter! I can't help but feel giddy for Bella! Once again you transported me back in time and I love it.
msjenmarie chapter 5 . 9/22/2010
Loved this chapter! Again, you have captured the sweet angst and uncertainty of H.S. so accurately. I love how you are painting E and B. Can't wait for more :).
Sunsetwing chapter 5 . 9/22/2010
I was so not ready for that one to end, holy cow.
TrulyOutrageous chapter 5 . 9/22/2010
Love it! I LOVE that she wanted to kiss him and she did.
dlhk chapter 5 . 9/22/2010
Gah! So good. How do you do it? How do you make the reader feel 15 again? I loved this chapter. I'm so happy Edward is into her. I LOVED the beach scene... Guh! So hot. I love this bella and how bold she is turning out to be. She just may get exactly what she wants. I can't wait for more. -mommyofboth
roxiegirl chapter 5 . 9/22/2010
Thank you! Oh the memories! Not like I ever snuck out of my, yeah right. Can't wait to see how far they go!
ltlerthqak chapter 5 . 9/22/2010
Jeepers this chapter was so pretty. I loved it!
StoryPainter chapter 5 . 9/22/2010
This story is fun and stirs up memories from my high school years.

Do you live in FL? I grew up in North FL and no one had basements because the water-table was way too high. Just thought I'd throw that out there because of the whole pool table in Jacob's basement thing. I've never heard of anyone in FL having a basement...

Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope we eventually get to find out the method to Edward's madness :-)

Luv ya, bb!
emilyg80 chapter 5 . 9/22/2010
Beautiful. Your words slay me. I love how perfectly you have captured these two in their teen years.

Thanks! :-)
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lionola chapter 5 . 9/22/2010
I can't help feel like something is going to go wrong soon - it all seems so perfect, you know?
Lettersie17 chapter 5 . 9/22/2010
So many good moments from this chapter. I seriously adore the way you write. When you talked about his eyes being on gave me goosebumps! And that last line in the chapter...*sigh* so beautiful

I have to agree with Bella that I too always wished I had a two story house but it was way more useful in being able to sneak out...which I did so many times I cant even count. I still doubt my mom knows that I did that as much as I did. And it was Alwaaaysss to see a boy ;)

Gotta give love to 311-amber. A fave song growing up
happymelt chapter 5 . 9/22/2010
Sometimes, nuthing beats a good smoochin' session! :) xo
maria2906 chapter 5 . 9/22/2010
*siiiiiigh*! To be in high school again! (no thanks)

What I love most about this story is how dizzy I feel afterwards! But good dizzy, like I've been spiraling around and around and all these sweet yet intense emotions are running through me and around me without ever settling in just one.

I love that he's slowly approaching her more, with actions more than with words..small, sweet actions that say so much more than an "I like you".

Their kisses warm my heart! I can't get enough of their sweet moments alone together!
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