|Reviews for Good Morning!|
| Bella chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Nice story, very sexy and pretty hot.
A piece of advice: do not use the word hair so much, it's eeek!
Unless is the hair that a man/woman has on top of a head, of course!
or in case of the happy trail hair from belly botton to crock that man have, that is sexy!
A hairy crock...no...it's just the opposite of sexy!
| loverboysgirl chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
| Atramentous StygianIron chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
| Devora13 chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Your story is good, the J/E sloash was HOT.
The only 2 things that I miss are: Plot/introduccion or background a favor for the visual don't use the word hair, unless is chest and/or lil sexy trim that goes from belly bottom to you know where.
That said, continue writing my dear. You have talent!
| lil joker 1989 chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
wow... wow... wow ]
| Mochi no Yume chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
I love the sense of detail you put into this one!
And the ending was awesome because there was this sense of comfort between them :)
| Utena-Puchiko-nyu chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
It was sooo hot!
Good work ;O
| LovingPipersBoys chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Very nice. I loved this story. It was hot and sexy as hell. Although I would have liked to see a bit more of a background story, this was a great one-shot. Keep writing because you are good at it.
| Robin-Red BlackWaters chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Edward's huge hairy hard-on? Ewww... lol... I'm trying to picture Edward like that... Hot! NOT, Edward's hairiness but the chapter:-)