Reviews for Step Right Up
roxymar chapter 19 . 4/29/2015
Awww! I loved being at the circus! I can't believe I never read this, it's so good!
Edward going from womanizer to one girl was really cute. I liked bella's coming of age story and how she broke out of her shell. The family was great and settings were so colorful. I especially loved jake, seth and...Winston! That camel owned me lol. I cracked up when edward found out what he really was.
great story! Very entertaining and fun

-roxy
Browns chapter 19 . 3/7/2015
Thank you for journey. Thank you for your words. Thank you for allowing me to be a part of this masterpiece.
Browns chapter 18 . 3/7/2015
This was awesome!
Browns chapter 17 . 3/7/2015
Finally, he used "it" and ringed "Bella's little bell" to achieve "happy times." Sorry, I couldn't resist.

Loved this chapter, not just the happy times.
Browns chapter 16 . 3/6/2015
Yeah, I definitely remember none of this, but I have some comments.

Tanya seems like the lying conniving whore I thought she was from first appearance.

Renee is a miserable hag trying to live the life she thought she should have had through her daughter, and oh by the way...is it anyone's fault she's still in love with her ex? That's my impression anyway.

As for everyone else...Edward/Bella/Jake etc...cool cats.

I don't know how I'll feel if you kill off Winny.

Finally, how do you fix this clusterfuck in just 3 chapters? Hmmm?
Browns chapter 15 . 3/6/2015
Yup...this I remember. I don't think I was a part of your team anymore...but I remember this devastation.
Browns chapter 14 . 3/6/2015
Poor guy...he's created a monster. Lmao...
Browns chapter 13 . 3/6/2015
Yay! "Happy Times" and the L word! Magic fingers indeed...
Browns chapter 12 . 3/6/2015
I really despise that vindictive witch. Sadly, I have met many females like her in real life. It's really sad...
Browns chapter 11 . 3/6/2015
Well then..."happy times" with Magic.
Browns chapter 10 . 3/6/2015
"Is that your codeword for, well… you know?" My favorite line.

I'm going to check out that YouTube video.

Did I every tell you about my love of Aussie accents?
Browns chapter 9 . 3/6/2015
Bwahahahahaha jealousy over a camel.
Browns chapter 8 . 3/6/2015
And ads, too. I really miss the camaraderie that used to be in this fandom.

I was always a little puzzled by Renee's need to treat Bella like a naive child one moment, but then tell her to grow up the next.

May be my last review for tonight.
Browns chapter 7 . 3/5/2015
I still don't understand what you have to be nervous about. Raw talent?

I forgot how much I loved Winston.
Browns chapter 6 . 3/5/2015
I don't understand why this never received more reviews.
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