Reviews for Slow Dancing in a Burning Room
KelseyBea chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Even though I have never heard that song before I really liked it! It was a drama/angst which isn't always fun... But I still liked it! And it's a new idea too! Well to me anyway... You always see stories of BxE happily dating... break up... Get back together... Get married happily ever after. I have never seen a fix about marriage problems etc like this! Great job as always! I can't wait for the rest of the one shots to come!
Northern Light1000 chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Thanks. Lovely.
MissRe chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
It is angsty, but you gave them a new beginning and a place to start again. It happens in life and I'm glad you explored what led them there and gave us a taste of the work they had to do to get back to a good place. Awesome job.
cshorte chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Loved it!
sassy41 chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
I have to say i started to read and was going to delete because i already knew they where getting a divorce. but hey it all got turn around and they are needing to realize why they got married in the first place. learning to love the person as who they are today at this stage in their marriage and life. his job sure did take up alot of his time and really left nothing for her. i think bella was okay with at first until things start happening and he wasn't their and she shut down and gave up. i can't wait to see if they can have a new relationship. their in counseling which is great and they still do love each other. can't wait to see what happens. thanx
wytchwmn75 chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
That was beautiful. Heart-wrenching, breath taking, even heart breaking but beautiful. I cried, I can admit it. Excellent story.

xo- Wonderslut
fanofbones chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
That was excellent my dear cpw...

You wrote it beautifully..

The emotion showed through.

fab/vicki
dreampills chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
glad to see it have a happy ending!
Paco1230 chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
That was a great one shot! It was sad and sweet and a beautiful story!
Chilly Howdy chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Hey hunnypie :o) Great story! I was a bit worried there for a while! but them again I knew you wouldn't do that! lol Thanks for sharing this story :o) Chilly x
Canyaceme chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Great story! My heart ached for both of them but at least they made it through.
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
I loved it so sad sweet beautiful I loved it so

Good oh so good
Theresa Zhao chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
heartichokie but awwwww P
Hope4more chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Great one shot. It did a great job showcasing that marriage has it's ups and downs. There is no such thing as smooth sailing all the time!
Sunsetwing chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Wow, the first part clenched at my heart, seriously. So glad that it ended up alright in the end, you had me worried for a second.
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