|Reviews for Mistake|
| zaliyak chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
more chapters it needs more chapters!
| Louisvuittonfreak chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
| Littlevil01 chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
Keep going it's good.
| Misunderstoodbeauty10 chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
woa amazing idea
update soon :)
| Christina chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
WHAT THAT IT NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I WANT MORE
| flappy101 chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
Love it! Please please please update soon! Is this a one shot? Or r u going to update again?
| Kenzington chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
I love this!
| Crazybee3 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
This was very good and I was interested to see where you would have taken this story line.
I have read a few of your stories and have enjoyed them and I will keep looking out to see what you write!
| sum1 chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
wow gr8 story athough i didn't expect jasper to be so calm about
i thought he would b more... disappointed lol anyway still gr8 please update!
| ANGEL FALLEN FROM HEAVEN chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
i love this story soz its late and im tired gtg bye
| vamp1901 chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
Love it! Please continue soon! I want to see what happens next!
update very sooon, waiting.
| vamps chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
update! I want to read about newborn Bella and Edwards relationship.
| Vampirelover922010 chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
i like this story awww poor japser he feels so bad hehe i soo excited bella is a vampire please continue i cant wait for whats going to happen in the next chapter!
| kdillin chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
| yasminb462 chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Hmm in ways I like this one better than the book but then Edward wouldn't have changed her and there would be no renesemee. I really liked this story please UD soon. Maybe nxt chapter could be how bella goes hunting and it turns out that she nearly eats a hunter, Edward takes her to the meadow they eat lion and they have sex or somethin.
Love this chapter :)