Reviews for Thunderstorm
SHeri chapter 1 . 10/16/2013
that was AWESOME... do more lemon..
glambert92711 chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
youtuber411 chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
I LOVED IT! and i love how you say Please dont hurt me! it makes me laugh. :) please please PLEASE keep writing Adommy fictions! i love them!
xXAdamVanityMonroeXx chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
This so was cute. I loved it. Good job !
Crazme11 chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
Haha that was soo cute but yeah, a bit corny. They dont seem like the type to be so sappy and say sweet nonense:P

Also, Tommy is afraid of heights, as far as I know, not of spiders and stuff but all in all the story was really good :D
GlitterBabyMorgan 3 chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
This was an amazing story...I can imagine every single part in my head (:

Great job :DD
Tina chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
Very nice!liked it a lot ;)
Suziee chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Good job ! But I still would have liked the lemon :( Next time :)
TheKinkyCumberbabe chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Awwww~ Adorablesauce :3 *fav*
Reviewnesa chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Omg! So cute(: and not scared of thuderdtorms! I wouldn't be if I got to have sex with adam lambert everytime a thunderstorm was going on! Damn lucky Tommy(; lol but honestly, it was awesome!
The Akuma's Sakura Violin chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
I liked it. :)

It was cute yet kinky, but it still has room for improvement...

Two words:

Enter Key

USE IT! It makes it much easier to follow a story, putting a gap between two peoples voices is something you should work on, apart from that, great job!

xfbdyydbjh chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
TommysHotterThanHezz chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Cute :) write more! Try

1: Pick a character, pairing, or fandom you like: Adommy, bitch.

2. Turn on your music player and put it on random/shuffle.

3. Write a ficlet/drabble related to each song that plays. You only have the time frame of the song to finish the drabble; you start when the song starts, and stop when it's over. No lingering afterwards!

4. Do ten of these, and then post them.

? :)
JJKMagic chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Gorgeous! The story I mean ;)
AlexRose312 chapter 1 . 11/7/2010

*is disappointed at the lack of lemon*
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