|Reviews for Soft Place To Fall|
| xoxodanalucyxoxo chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
Okay, I have a few issues with this story.
1. Please capitalize your letters.
2. Try to be more descriptive.
3. Put more space between your paragraphs, I'm having trouble reading them.
Other than that, I really like it and would love to read more. Please update.