|Reviews for Finding Them|
| Lost-In-A-New-World chapter 1 . 11/22/2015
this is just beautiful
| Ariana Deralte chapter 1 . 1/10/2015
This was really sweet. Cheers!
| Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
Mila, this gave me chills. Beautifully done.
| Natalie chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
I quite like this. There are only two things I want to point out to you:
1 you forgot about Little Bear. He was in the hole with them too
2 you forgot that the heartfire is underground. They would go UP to the infirmary and Sandry would have had a very hard time leaning out of a window.
Other than that great story. It really hit home.
(I just re-read the seires this week. I have about 50 pages of Briars Book left)
| phoenixphlight chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Beautiful. You captured their relationships and really showed the beginnings of a family.
| Books1993 chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
I LOVE this story! Good Job!
| KrazyKimmy chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
you have even me on the edge of tears with this. I love it!
| niver chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
This was sweet. :)
| KrisEleven chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
This is adorable. I would have liked a little more transition between the first part of them talking to Moonstream and them being at the site... Or they are there? I was confused. Just a little line placing us at the beginning would have been nice.
Other than that and one tiny typo (to instead of too), I really liked this. The characters were perfect and I think you got a very unique perspective here. Good job.
| JuzSomeone chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
awww... :X wat a warm story..
| ivyspinners chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
A good look at just how frantic the teachers must have been, especially in comparison to Moonstream. Niko seemed a bit OOC with "And—goodness!" though. He's always felt more... quietly intense to me. The hug was nice :) The ending was very fitting, too.