Reviews for Finding Them |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is just beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really sweet. Cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mila, this gave me chills. Beautifully done. -Dyslexic Nerd |
![]() ![]() I quite like this. There are only two things I want to point out to you: 1 you forgot about Little Bear. He was in the hole with them too 2 you forgot that the heartfire is underground. They would go UP to the infirmary and Sandry would have had a very hard time leaning out of a window. Other than that great story. It really hit home. (I just re-read the seires this week. I have about 50 pages of Briars Book left) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. You captured their relationships and really showed the beginnings of a family. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE this story! Good Job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you have even me on the edge of tears with this. I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was sweet. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is adorable. I would have liked a little more transition between the first part of them talking to Moonstream and them being at the site... Or they are there? I was confused. Just a little line placing us at the beginning would have been nice. Other than that and one tiny typo (to instead of too), I really liked this. The characters were perfect and I think you got a very unique perspective here. Good job. KrisEleven~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww... :X wat a warm story.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A good look at just how frantic the teachers must have been, especially in comparison to Moonstream. Niko seemed a bit OOC with "And—goodness!" though. He's always felt more... quietly intense to me. The hug was nice :) The ending was very fitting, too. |