Reviews for Finding Them |
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Lost-In-A-New-World chapter 1 . 11/22/2015 this is just beautiful |
Ariana Deralte chapter 1 . 1/10/2015 This was really sweet. Cheers! |
Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 1 . 10/2/2013 Mila, this gave me chills. Beautifully done. -Dyslexic Nerd |
Natalie chapter 1 . 7/31/2012 I quite like this. There are only two things I want to point out to you: 1 you forgot about Little Bear. He was in the hole with them too 2 you forgot that the heartfire is underground. They would go UP to the infirmary and Sandry would have had a very hard time leaning out of a window. Other than that great story. It really hit home. (I just re-read the seires this week. I have about 50 pages of Briars Book left) |
phoenixphlight chapter 1 . 6/7/2012 Beautiful. You captured their relationships and really showed the beginnings of a family. |
Books1993 chapter 1 . 11/18/2011 I LOVE this story! Good Job! |
KrazyKimmy chapter 1 . 6/9/2011 you have even me on the edge of tears with this. I love it! |
niver chapter 1 . 12/27/2010 This was sweet. :) |
KrisEleven chapter 1 . 10/3/2010 This is adorable. I would have liked a little more transition between the first part of them talking to Moonstream and them being at the site... Or they are there? I was confused. Just a little line placing us at the beginning would have been nice. Other than that and one tiny typo (to instead of too), I really liked this. The characters were perfect and I think you got a very unique perspective here. Good job. KrisEleven~ |
JuzSomeone chapter 1 . 9/16/2010 awww... :X wat a warm story.. |
ivyspinners chapter 1 . 9/12/2010 A good look at just how frantic the teachers must have been, especially in comparison to Moonstream. Niko seemed a bit OOC with "And—goodness!" though. He's always felt more... quietly intense to me. The hug was nice :) The ending was very fitting, too. |