Wow, again, this made me cry, even though I don't know the characters. I was talking to your friend, Zuzuhuntress and she said that you write dark stories even though you're not that dark. I see that now. In a lot of your stories, I felt like crying. Again, good job! You're an awesome writer.

I cried. It was beautiful.

(Out of 5)

Plot: 5

Grammar: 4.9. Probably 5, but I'm tired and my eyes are prolly playing tricks on me.

My Liking: 10.

Ooh, very interesting. I like how it's from a half-blood who joined the titans point of view. I also like how she tried protecting her best friend.

Well written.

I think there's a few moments with confused tenses there. And one moment where a 'he' made me go 'huh'?

Otherwise; I love the theme. It's well-written, the scene you've come up with has... impact, somehow. It's very good, and well worth a read.

Musafreen

That was suprisingly great. I loved how you forced us to feel that demigods pain. Artistic. Beautiful, yet disturbing.

Keep at it!

awesome story

touching, but yet awesome

like mchan herself

but again, i am too

im not narrcistic

but im still awesome

depresin! but good.

lollllz