Reviews for A Sunless World
DolphinDreamer24-7 chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
I liked it! Very nice job connecting the stars between the two characters ;0

xxx

Dolphins
Lieutenant Of Artemis chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
Aw :) Such a beautiful piece. Laura Schiller did the praising, I'll do the criticism:

- "Rathina wants us to get going at first light"

Period after the quotation mark, eh? :D

- bad knews.

Spelling error :) Should be 'news'.

- Once on a time

I believe you mean 'upon'.

...but that was just me nitpicking. Overall, I really like it, especially your descriptions; they're powerful that I have wonderful mental images in my mind. And your emotions were right-on.

Very nice job on this piece.

Good luck in writing.

Lieutenant Of Artemis
Laura Schiller chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Beautiful and heartbreaking. You have both boys' characters captured really well, and the way they feel about Tania; I especially liked the part about her being 'a piece of home' for Connor, and the description of Edric's bleak surroundings in Weir which contrast so strongly with his memories of Tania.

It's funny how those two dislike each other so much and yet they have such an important thing in common - they love her.

The ending, though ... have you read The Enchanted Quest? Because if you have, it might strike you as rather ironic.