|Reviews for Underneath My Being is a Road that Disappeared|
| sillyolddoctor chapter 9 . 5/26/2011
This is without a doubt my favorite Bones fanfiction ever. No joke. Pregnancy fics are everywhere, especially now, but this one is different in that it feels so real, and in-character. If this is the way the storyline works out on the show, I will be very, very happy. Seriously, can you just send it to the writers with the heading "Season 7"? Hahaha. I don't usually reread fanfiction, but I keep coming back to this one. Your style is endlessly entertaining and the characters extremely believable. I hate when B&B get together and it's "YAY! Butterflies and rainbows forever!" Because, obviously, that is not them. They fight and push each others buttons. A relationship would be a challenge, and I think you portray that really well.
Anyway, great, great fic. I love it to pieces. And despite how it sounds, I'm not crazy. Really, I'm not.
| BlueOwlGrey chapter 9 . 5/24/2011
While I'm generally not a prego-fic fan (this summer is going to be agony) I really like the way you have handled them. Keeping it from wildly OOC while letting them expand into a possible future. And Ellie Brennan Booth is adorable.
| The-Sun-Princess chapter 9 . 5/4/2011
All I can say is d'aaawwwww _ adorable
| TemperTemper chapter 9 . 4/25/2011
This was just lovely. You managed to keep them so IC throughout.
Here via rec from biba79 :)
| Biba79 chapter 9 . 4/22/2011
Awwww. Lil Ellie!
Not only I approve of the gender, but I also approve of the name. You did good, and you didn't even have me bugging you about baby!fic when you wrote this. I'm very proud!
I love how Bren was in labor for a long time, but she wanted to finish her novel first. haha. Obviously she would do that. I'm glad that Booth noticed it and took her to the hospital. haha!
I loved this story. I want a sequel. Remember I said I would bug you about that. Well, GET READY!
| Biba79 chapter 8 . 4/22/2011
Woah. what a fun chapter.
Booth wakes up, Bren gets arrested and they decide to move in together for good.
I like how she told him she was ready, and she didn't need the 3 months to decide. Poor Booth, he was drugged up. hahahah!
I love it so far. Now onto the epilogue. *sniff sniff* This is almost over and it's making me sad!
| Biba79 chapter 7 . 4/22/2011
You are trying to kill Booth while she's pregnant? And you say you are not good at angst? Yeah right. That's a meter 5 for sure.
I can't believe she convinced Booth to let her come, but I guess if she didn't, he would have died. So, that was good.
I know he will wake up, because I know you. So I'm not worried!
| Biba79 chapter 6 . 4/22/2011
Like I said, I was hoping this would turn into a Parker is missing, but this angst was just as amazing. I love how conflicted she was because she loved their daughter way too much. That goes to show you how she will make an excellent mother.
I'm glad that Booth found her and talked to her, and they even had a romantic baby kick moment. Awwww!
All seems good now. Just waiting to see what happens next! haha! Hopefully there will be more angst!
| Biba79 chapter 5 . 4/22/2011
It's angsty to the max in this chapter. I love how they are pissed at each other and still, they are there and sleeping in the same bed.
That's what real couples do, Bones! I'm glad she stayed.
Looking forward to more!
| Biba79 chapter 4 . 4/21/2011
It's a girl.
I'm so excited right now, you have no idea.
I also love how he got her a rocking chair.
Did I tell you it's a GIRL?
That's all I got for this review, no bitching. I'm happy!
| Biba79 chapter 3 . 4/21/2011
I love that they are doing an experiment and Bren is giving a try to live together. I really hope it works out. And Bren is awesome to going to live with Booth for 3 months just because of Parker.
You keep saying how Bren loves angry sex and wall sex, but you don't show us. That's so unfair. I think you should write an angry sex fic! Angry Sex Smutty Fic! I say go for it! :P
| Biba79 chapter 2 . 4/21/2011
I love their fights, her fight with trying not to throw up, and everything about this chapter.
They should have practice before telling Max. hahahaha!
It was so cute them getting an ultrasound. And she cried. SHE CRIED. She's evolving and that's great.
| Biba79 chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Ah. This was made of awesome!
I loved how scared and afraid she was. No wonder she didn't want to drink any tequila.
I can't imagine what it was like for her to wait for a week knowing that the possibility that she was pregnant was pretty high, especially after the first test. And alone, because she hadn't told anyone. Dealing with it, must have been hard, and after getting that phone call must have been scary.
Although she knows that Booth will be there to support her through anything and this is another step that she will love eventually.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Woot! Off I go!
| rbutler chapter 9 . 4/10/2011
oh yay, this is working again - alas, all my brilliant thoughts disappeared in the time between I read this story and the review function was working...I thought everyone was very in character, which is always awesome. My Brennan is perhaps too self-assured. You capture her caution and difficulty moving forward in their relationship very well.
I especially liked Rebecca and Brennan being tandem mama bears at Parker's hockey game and Max's description of Brennan's birth. And LOVED Booth's "maybe our clothes should be together" invitation to cohabitate- that's so Boothy!
| mrscribble chapter 9 . 4/9/2011
so after the incredibly sweet review you left me I clicked on your page and proceeded to read all of your Bones fic and I have to say that you are an INCREDIBLE writer for this fandom and you write the characters perfectly. Their banter is just spot on and your Brennan voice especially is just perfect, probably the best I've read in the fandom since I got into it. I'm looking forward to reading anything else you write! :)