Reviews for The Surprise
Marie chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Thanks for writing BF, hope you willcontinue writing as you know the characters and its intriguing. Brenda at least willing to try whether or not it happens ? Is all yours but I know will enjoy reading your work!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
I found this VERY VERY interesting and id love for you to continue. Great so far! :)
MissD.Willows chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Great Start! I'd loved to know what will happens next. Update, please?
Labyrinth01 chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Great start. Please update.
callih chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
I found the murder mystery very compelling. I hope you continue the story as I am interested to know more about the unfortunate victim and her intruder.

Good grasp of character interaction and fun plot line. Fritz would definitely want to have a baby..best present ever for the man who has everything. ha.

Loved the ..flynn's new girlfriend line. I'm jealous already. Big Flynn fan here. But..good story, really. I'm hooked.
Magadoodle1 chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Wow! I really like the story so far! Very nice! I hope you continue!
Angelina56 chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
love it good story