|Reviews for Vaguely|
| FrizFr0z chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Another beautiful piece. Seriously, its getting difficult to do a review for you because for the most part, your one-shots are flawless.
If I just had to find a fault with this story, its that the beginning is slightly over-descriptive. The depiction of the nature and the river is stunning, but I didn't get what your story was driving at until the 5th paragraph. I particularly love how you illustrated the joie de vivre of this teenage love though, and it is truly heart-rending to have the boy stolen from her through a cruel twist of fate.
Just a curious question: Do you begin most of your stories by writing the ending before developing the middle and the start? Cos I can't find a story of yours where the ending isn't perfect but sometimes the introduction, well, beats around the bush. Anyway, lovely story as always :)
P.S. 15 MINS!