Reviews for Picking up the Pieces
Tikigod784 chapter 3 . 12/9/2013
Yeah... Roberta definitely got a better deal in the manga. XD
ZonaRose chapter 2 . 3/3/2011
LOL! this was great. I thoroughly enjoyed, although I would like to see you finish the first chapter.

Until then, keep up the great writing.

In Love & Light,

Zona Rose ~*
ZonaRose chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
Nicely done. I would like to see more in this paring of Vanessa/Madlax. I loved them in the amime.
writer-jm chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
Wooo! Someone with some pedegree covering Madlax! (haven't checked the area in a while anyway, so no offense to others)

I really, really liked how Vanessa and Eleanore woke up in the same bed... Hilarious, especially after "sock puppet theater" from ADV! Best easter egg ever!

Twas truly another one of those odd series. I guess it was the starting point for BeeTrain going in a bit of an odd direction. Eeep, personal dissertation aside.

Thanks for covering Madlax with fun and asking the hard questions. I would have expected a little more shoujo-ai tension with Madlax and Limelda practically jumping each other's bones... LOL! And then the blatant hints with Vanessa and Eleanore.


gundam gal7 chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
This is utterly awesome!

I do hope you write a sequel to this.
Kiros Razer chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
I liked this thus far and I hope that you continue it.

I liked Madlax.