Reviews for Anything But Innocent
GoHaNViDeLSoN chapter 3 . 5/29
Woah! This story is definitely pent up with emotions. I can clearly see through that. Seems like the author has wonderfully portrayed Goku's hidden desires...

TIME is such a dangerous thing to play with...
Just like a simple flap of butterfly's wing in China can lead to a violent tornado in America...
A simple pebble dropped in the sea of past can create huge ripples in the turbulence of timelines...

The mere act of Goku ending up with Bulma, the mere act of Goku not marrying Chichi, the non-existence of Gohan in this timeline can lead to the greatest catastrophe unimaginable...

Gohan has always been a pivotal figure throughout DBZ, all the major plots are Gohan-centric. The mere disappearance of Gohan can greatly disrupt the normal chain of events...

Just for starter, if everything happened the way Goku wished for them to be, so no sooner would he back to the original timeline, he would find himself along with the rest of Earth's Population in the Otherworld or HFIL ( for some particular guests per se).
The REASON: Without the existence of Gohan, and with Gohan and Bulma together, there won't be any Trunks. So the Android timeline is more helpless than ever...

With no one from the Mirai or Android timeline appearing to give Goku his heart-cancer medicines, he would succumb to his heart disorder...
And then it would just be a repeat of the Android events and the DOOM OF THE EARTH!

So our beloved dear Goku, "Think before you act, 'coz you are ANYTHING BUT INNOCENT..."
Tellemicus Sundance chapter 3 . 11/13/2016
...This is definitely one of the more...awkward love stories I've ever seen! And while I can understand the necessity of having Gohan (he did SO MANY important things at equally important times) and Trunks (he's a time warrior, so pretty damn important) in the storyline, it feels too restricting that you're essentially FORCING Goku and Bulma to conform to that. I confess that the journey to those decisions and actions will definitely be interesting to see, I just wish that Piccolo and Vegeta weren't there to put even more pressure on the situation. I mean, Bulma actively fighting against the situation and trying to dissuade Goku is ample enough pressure as is, why compound the issue by adding in even more people to the dilemma?

Like I said, a very awkward love story and while there are stuff that I don't like or agree with, I will DEFINITELY be keeping an eye on this one. Please update again soon!
Leo the zodiac chapter 3 . 5/31/2016
Gohan! Gohan! Gohan! Gohan!

Maybe chi chi will be less strict on gohan in raising her and teach him martial arts. Please... *puppy dog eyes*
sukisuzukipuki chapter 3 . 11/21/2015
I REALLY REALLY hope to God that you are going to continue with this story because it rocks hardcore! It's awesome 'cause the subjects that you are covering are questions I ask myself when I think about what ifs. It's really fun reading this story while Bulma and Goku are watching their pasts. Your story is fantastically entertaining. Please keep up the chapters, and I promise I'll keep reading them and reviewing! Love it!
Gater-Da-Gunslinger chapter 3 . 8/3/2015
Glad to see you back! I just noticed today this had been updated. I figured you were done with this story because its been 5 years since you last updated. Been then again, I didn't know you had put up a second chapter, this being the third. Anyways on to my little review!

I love the way you characterize Goku, since I feel like he would definitely act like this if he was kind of bad. You have him in character, but I really like the twisted take on this. Everyone makes Goku seem selfless, but he is selfish many times, like when he leaves his family after Cell kills him. Or at the end of z, leaving with Uub. Like Goku's heart is in the right place, but he doesn't really put thought to how his family and friends will react with his decisions. He just assumes that they would be okay with it or just get over it. And it's sad to say, they do forgive him lol

Goku still has his innocence here and the added change is kinda believable because he's older and obviously learned things to do with relationships on a much higher level.

I hope they do end up together, cause while I think Vegeta and Bulma aren't bad together, I'm not really a fan, which is why I don't read stories with them together, that focus only on them. Anyways is everything falls in place, when the timeline is altered, it won't matter anymore. they won't remember that things got changed right. Though the Vegeta and Piccolo heading to Namek could screw everything up. I hope they fail or are to late cause it will take days or months to get to new Namek. Unless they have help from the Kai's. Can't you just make their ship blow up? Lol

Keep up the good work and I really hope you finish this story!

Btw the Goku screwing line was awesome.

~Gater~
guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2015
1 of the best gb fits I have read keep up the good work
Rachel L. Inoue chapter 3 . 7/5/2015
Oh my gosh! Update, it's getting good! And good job with this chapter, Gilded Blue! Keep it up x3
LightAngel chapter 3 . 7/5/2015
Thank you for this Goku/Bulma story, they're my favourite DB fan fic couple!
TheDoctorsTimeLady chapter 3 . 7/5/2015
this is getting really good. i can't wait to see what happens next.
Sportsfan64 chapter 3 . 7/4/2015
Oh this looks like an interesting read. I can't wait for more.
MisakaSaru chapter 3 . 7/4/2015
Thank you so much for this chapter! Aw I can't wait to read more. I REALLY hope Goku won't have sex with chichi, oh no. Why can't he and Bulma just be happily together. I really really love this fic. Please update soon. I'm anxious to see how this will play out.
Rachel L. Inoue chapter 2 . 6/7/2015
You have to update! I know it's late but it's really interesting! Dx
Mars chapter 2 . 12/30/2014
Wow! Whobis this goku! I'm hot and bothered thinking of him and Bulma together! Just as bad as my stomach churning in horror!
Luis chapter 2 . 10/6/2014
This story is amazing! Goku and bulma really are something special. I don't think goku ever fell in love with chichi. Their relationship is so off. It's rather reasonable that goku finally realized his secret love for bulma, the first girl he knew, after all these years. Seriously you can't just leave it here, please come back and update.
Akito Asmodeus chapter 2 . 9/7/2014
This shit is so freaking twisting man. One just keeps rejecting the other's points.
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