Reviews for Jorinda and Joringel
tin-a-holic chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
you make me so happy. - by the by sorry my posts are just short. i figured its been a while for you and you may not want as much critique, not that i have much anyway. i just really like your stuff and wanted you to know.
Lcsaf chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
The girls will be after him, going about the spankings they think they deserve, I suppose, for being naughty enough to go traipsing the countryside without an appropriate guardian. Poor Cain, he can't catch a break no matter what his luck.
ladyAlyafaelyn chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Once again, a story that makes me laugh so hard I'm almost falling out of my chair. Where's Sir Galahad when you need him? He WANTS that kind of peril...

Sic Vita Est chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
You never cease to make me laugh, I truly love your one-shots! :) Once again it was amazing.
Lauramichca chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
I had forgotten about this fairytale, and then you go and turn it on its ear and leave us howlling in the dirt trying to breathe around our laughter. Another beautiful job. Thanks!
Miller0259 chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Did he look like a botanist?

Hahahahahaha WIN! Favorite. Line. Ever.

This fairytale sounds familiar but the names don't. And I think I'd remember those names...So I have no idea what I know this story from...hmmm...

Anyway, your version is much better of course!
Scarlet Garter chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
as always - very well written, and made me laugh out loud!


CurlyHairedDisaster chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
"he had an evil enchantment breaker. He called it gun."

XD I love Cain. I really do. You can bet your last Oreo I would've been one of the maidens (who are decidedly fangirl like) in pursuit.

Great story as usual!
Helen175 chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Hah! Lol. Love your version of Cain.
daughterofthe1king chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Okay, your brain does interesting things!

I have actually (crazy I know) heard this fairytale before and you stayed pretty true to the concept (minus the gun-toting, drool-worthy Tin Man)...

Very good; I commend you...

And I will not make mention of any other stories I might have wanted to read first either... :P
Salallie chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
I have never heard of Jorinda and Joringel (possibly the single most retarded names ever), but I am damn happy that GoldenRoya was genius.

DG would never go down without a fight...even as a bird.
forestofmyown chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
That was great! Though I'd never heard of this tale, your rendition was, once again, totally HILARIOUS! Man, too bad Cain didn't get to 'go swimming' with DG though. But really, all them girls? DG's gonna be kicking some maiden butt very soon, whenever she stops laughing (which I'm sure she still is - I am).
ReaderinthePNW chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Silliness! *crosses eyes* This was adorable! Keep up the awesome work!
KLCtheBookWorm chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Tin Man woke with a splitting headache and hauled himself to his feet. Did he look like a botanist? The witch had DG, Cain didn't have time to traipse about the O.Z. picking flowers, he didn't need a magical flower, he had an evil enchantment breaker. He called it gun. - *Giggle!SNORT*

I do have a tiny issue. Zooey's actually a singer with a couple of albums. So it doesn't make sense to me that DG can't sing. But it works in the story.
Bookworm Gal chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
That was too awesome. Especially three particular parts:

"Did he look like a botanist?"

"He had an evil enchantment breaker. He called it a gun."

And the wave of new admirers chasing him out of the castle.
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