Reviews for Omission
ExcaliburStuckInMyStoneHeart chapter 1 . 9/4/2015
it feels like i read 10 chapters , it was really good , /
My-name-is-a-drug-legit chapter 1 . 6/17/2015
While I can understand Merlin's upset about Arthur's profession, I felt that the end result was not as satisfactory as I had hoped. Arthur explained the difference between sex for work and sex with Merlin, and Merlin obviously got off from Arthur's job. To be honest, I thought that Arthur was going to keep being a porn star, and Merlin would accept it.

On a good note, your spelling and grammar was near immaculate, which I give points to you for, since I can be a bit of a grammar and spelling Nazi.
RobinTheWitch chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
Nice :)

_Robin_
ColdHeartsAndMinds chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
It's good! Nice that there;s a good story in there as well! It's a good story, and you're an amazing writer!
wheresmyjawn chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
fantastic! good prompt, great story and fantastic writing :)
The Doctor Lives chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
Uhhh finding out that your parter is/was a porn star now that makes people react in strange ways. It's so sad when Merlin pretends to cheat then they break up. Then the motel scene were they make up. Great story though.
jennasushkowitz chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
In case my clicking the favorite button on every story of yours isn't enough indication, I absolutely adore you. And these two boys. I love your style of writing and your plotlines always draw me in. You are absolutely brilliant.
Merlocked18 chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
Bradley Avalon? LMAO:-):-) thanks for a nice angst fix, again! This is becoming an addiction!
Totallystarstruck chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Amazing! Brilliant :D
Her Pillow James chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
I love it in a story when one of the main characters turn out to be a porn star ;)
CotB chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Sooooooooooo sweet! I love this story! All of it was fantastic! Contadulaions!
intensewhatever chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
This story was literally amazing. Awesome job! :)
Toulip Fontana chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Wow. That was phenomenal. Hands down one of the best stories I've ever read.
Sharon T chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Loved the hot fluffiness :)
DemeRain chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
Simply brilliant. Thanks for sharing.
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