Reviews for Chocolate Syrup
xImperfectPerfectionistx chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
I like how it went from "MATT YOU FUCKING USELESS PIECE OF SHIT" to "YaoiYaoiYaoi" in a paragraph; I couldn't help but laugh my face off at Matt's seductiveness my god. :33 Good job.
494dwangel chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
oh fcuk...i can't stop laughing its hilarious lol
TrueHeroOfTime chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
LMFAO, that was hilarious, and the ending was great. But I really do think you should try writing a sex scene, I really think you'd be good at it.
me chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
that was very in character, excellent job **wonders off to get some chocolate syrup** :]
Eliza the Writer chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
I'm not a fucking duckling :(

heh. Sorry. I'm just in a bad mood cause my friend dared me to go a week wthout chocolate (I was too stupid to refuse) and now u gave me a chocolate craving *sobs*

still, I loved the story _

now I gotta go kill Martha DX
Martata chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
and that duck, was the best thing Ive ever read that was near to but not a sex scene. amazing well done. Martata x