Reviews for Spilt Milk |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A cute and sweet hurt/comfort where we get to see the best of John's sarcastic and stubborn side, right alongside Sherlock's caring yet a bit clueless moments ;) Thank you for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha. Quite funny. I rather liked it. -GD. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol nice very well done! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a delightful little story! I'm so glad I discovered it. Perfect ending. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor John. It's good for Sherlock to take the role of doctor at times. I loved this, you have a wonderful writing touch, well done you :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Delightful. And I suppose staying away from the stairs rules out John's bedroom. Well Sherlock barely sleeps so I don't imagine he'd begrudge a few nights on the sofa. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bloody awesome! |
![]() ![]() :) love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You wrote this just so you could use that last line, didn't you :P Loved this :) Caring Sherlock is always sweet to see. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, I would have loved to see the reaction of the Yard at seeing John all battered like this. But seriously, good story :) |
![]() ![]() Haha... great! The last line was epic XD Beautiful, always wanted fics where for once it would be Sherlock taking care of John for once XD Thank you, keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() Hah! Great hurt/comfort and great ending but my favorite line was - 'You need to watch out for those stairs, especially on a day like this. Right death trap they are,' I know England's probably less litigious than we are, but just a great line to come from a landlord right after a tenant has an accident. I expected a bevy of lawyers to spring like weeds from behind the furniture cards in hand ready to sue on John's behalf. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely brilliant. And all in character too XD _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this! Think you did a great job here :) It's not cheesy, it's perfectly in character and I could actually visualise Sherlock and John in that scenario, John had every ounce of sympathy I could ever give and Sherlock was just brilliant - sweetly taking care of John's needs while at the same time being strangely clinical and practical. No-nonsense Sherlock ;) You also have practically flawless grammar/punctuation and a great variety of vocabulary. To be honest, my ideal kind of fic. Thanks for sharing! :) |