Reviews for Before the Dawn
Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
JoyBouncing chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
You should continue! That is one of the most amazing chapters I have read
Rhavis chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
OK, this gots me hooked like a fish...
Sentimental Semantics chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Even on my second or third read through I appreciate the narrative here. Your voice is very distinct and I hope that my edits do not detract from it; one way or another you are very well-off when it comes to embellishing and coloring your characters, and I'm quite envious of that. You can really feel for the characters in this piece, despite not having known them too well. Sacrifice is a fitting symbol for this short piece.

Great work!
Victor Weiss chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Very nice! You got Vano directly on character, it's as if I typed up his words myself, the story itself is also good.

Very interesting.

Yeah...I suck at reviewing, heh.