Reviews for Too Perfect to be True
SiRenfield chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
LOL. I agree, I think aside from Sonic, Ouran has some of the worst Mary-Sues I've ever seen. Most of them directly rip-offing Haruhi. Pretty good!
LT8 chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Awesome job! I love how you handled it lol.

I'll admit I'm a Kyoya x Haruhi shipper and I have the same reason you said, because they match a bit better, but I try not to impose on canon, so I just have to accept Tamaki x Haruhi XP

Love how everyone was just so used to the Mary Sue by now that they had perfected their acting roles.
V Tsuion chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
This is an interesting interpretation of the Mary Sue. I liked it, it made her almost sympathetic, in a pity the fool sort of way.
xxxfire-feariexxx chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Loved it. You really had me going there at the beginning, sighing and thinking I was reading another terrible fanfiction with a Mary Sue. Great job, you should continue writing parodies.
BloodstainedQuill chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
ShadowAssasin41 Im sorry im not the author but haruhi isnt a mary sue because she is too blunt. She doesnt have a figure either, so ya! : )
ToxicSniper210 chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
Mary-Sues are annoying, but I can't really bash anyone's story if they have one because I've had a Mary-Sue story (at that time, I didn't even know what the hell a Mary-Sue was). From then on, I've planned out my characters and hoped that people would like them.

But there's one thing that I have to throw out here: would Haruhi be considered a Mary-Sue. Now, don't get mad at me or anyone else that reads it. It seems that whatever character Haruhi meets, they end up harboring some kind of romantic feelings for her, even the Zuka Club! I really hope you respond to this and if Haruhi's your favorite character, I'm sorry! I don't want to bash her because I like her too! It's just something that bothers me.
ambie-lee-smiley-chanX3 chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
haha i found the link to this on Tvtropes, and I'm very happy i read it.

MarySues, go die please.

i'm over them. They always get the man 'cause their perfect, and they always live happily ever after. So when they explode, I appluad.

Great job!
Kayy-chan chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Haha I loved his. The perfect mix of truth, comedy, and parody. Great job(:
jollysooks chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
true so very true *shakes head sadly* their are just too many of them

*cough* ahem... though one of my OCs sorta has photographic memory... im kinda worried if that is the same as that bit where you were bashing her 'advanced mind' (xDDD i was loling throughout~!)

but i could only write her having a photographc memory and skipping school so she could become a teacher at ouran cuz like i didnt want mori to end up with someone in their 20s cuz ...it just feels weird for me...though she may be intelectually advanced she's still just a rebellious teenager cuz she never had much of a childhood with her parents breathing down her neck and all... so im wonrdering if that counts as a mary sue? u.u i dont want it to count as a mary sue...

oh god im ranting...

this rant is the product of my many insercurities...*shifty eyes*

i'll just... stop now...
Zurla Adams chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
You mean "You be trollin'" Trolls? You know,"FAKE AND GAY." Kind of stuff? Heh, well yeah, this Mary Sue was kinda making me mini puke in my mind. Bleh, perfect XD
Miss Lorah chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
I applaud you _

The part about Tamaki saying he loved Haruhi for her faults... I don't want to spoil too much for anyone else who might see this, but I thought it was a nice touch.

Oh! When you had the Mary-Sue explode, I got really happy! That was exactly how I've been imagining the whole situation in my head, with the Mary-Sue realising that she is one, then freaking out and spontaneously combusting... glorious!

Now funnily enough the only improvement I could suggest is something that I hate about these Mary-Sue sort of characters. If you really wanted to emphasise her Mary-Sue-ness, I would have perhaps gone even more over the top with her physical description. It's not a huge deal or anything; just maybe missing 'her flawless hair flying gracefully in the wind' etc haha xD Again, emphasising it's not a huge deal, but just something tiny that I noticed.

I love how at the end you drew back on the seriousness of the issue at hand! Breaking the fourth wall at the end (and having Kyouya do it; it seems like a Kyouya thing to do) was nice as well. Thank you! My apologies if this is all too long and nonsensical :S This was quite enjoyable :3
Tempest78 chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
Interesting... A nice parody on the 'Mary Sue' She fit the definition to a T XD

I like that you kept the characters In Character and that the story took place in the school.

Over all your grammar was very good and the story was entertaining.

I liked 'prince charming's' message too. A nice way of instilling the message while keeping us entertained.

Your story wasn't cluttered with unnecessary details either, {which is always a plus in my book. Short sweet and to the point.}

Nice play on the OC's name too XD

For a first time parody you did a bang up job! :D
Drowning In Inspiration chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
I lov it!

I...um... [awkward scratch of head] am in the process of writing an OC story for OHSHC do not worry she WILL NOT BE A MARY SUE I HATE MARY SUE'S and if I so much as stray on the path of the Mary Sue my bf will smack me over the head with a giant squeaky hammer :)

Once again AWESOME!
Ranabanana Thingamabob chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
LUVS IT! - I especially loved it when Hemolele exploded! I so didn't see it coming...but YAY!
nicluvly chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Rofl! Omg this was freaking priceless! I love the sarcastic narration it was very clever. Then naming her perfection in hawaiin. She couldn't have been more of a mary sue if rainbows shot out of her butt and woodland creatures followed her around haha!
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