Reviews for Consequences
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
Interesting. I had to think about it. Peter seemed ridiculously harsh but maybe not, once I thought about it. Neal did need to get the message that some behaviors won't be tolerated. Thanks for writing!
JimChou chapter 1 . 2/22/2016
Just discovered your writings. Nicely done and very in character. Shows the characters as the decent people they are and teaches a sense of responsability trough thinking.
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
great story!

glad that neal thought about his situation...
it's sooo much better to have him around and not in prison...
peppe1951 chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Great story...a before and after type of story...hope it works for Neal
mouse8 chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Neal so needs to be held responsible for his actions. This was a creative way that didn't involve real punitive measures, yet conveyed the message that Peter was serious. I wish Neal could realise the impact of his decisions and appreciate the chances he's been given.
joy2190 chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Thank goodness Peter agreed to let Neal have the next weekend off.
Gladoo89 chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
Very nice oneshot!
ferryboat George chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
patbor chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
wow, this story is awesome! I've wondered if Peter would put Neal in "time out" but I never thought of anything as elaborate as that. I would love to see the painting of Peter and Elizabeth. I would love to have a painting of Neal.
LvSammy chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Vampire Queen chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Lol, very cute
Shadow Cat17 chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
I really enujoyed this! You convied everything so well!
Isiera chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Great story. I would really like to read more from you.
J. Rosemary Moss chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
Brilliant job! I like how Peter seems determined to remain strict and not to fall for his partner's charm-and I love Neal's internal dilemma as he starts off angry as hell at Peter and ends up wondering if there's some remote possibility that he himself might be at fault. :)

I also love Neal's way of apologizing!
MaraudingSnitch1314 chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Ah, I immensely enjoyed the ending. I'm not so sure that Peter would actually resort to using solitary confinement to punish Neal for his misdeeds in "In the Red" (they even joked about the stashed $100K). However, this was extremely well-written and a very fun read.

We need more artist!Neal in the show! )
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