|Reviews for End of the Line|
| Sdarian chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
This was pretty nice. Also, it's neat to see another view of the actions of the Senshi, especially with the whole Crystal Tokyo thing. Good job!
| WraithRune chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Awww! A sad ending!
| darkcuriosity chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
wow. that was seriously mind blowing. in a good way. i'm just stunned. this was very good. i loved your saving vs. destroying the world view point.
| BlazeStryker chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
This is one powerful tale.
Have you considered putting your abandoned ideas up for adoption instead of deletion?
Just a thought.
| Serina Starsong chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
The OOCNESS hit me like a train. Why even do a xover if you dont respect the characters? You clearly know nothing of SM, other then stupid Fanon like Crystal Tokyo nor their abilities or background. You might as well have well called them OCs.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
| Murdock Rane chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
wow this is one of your best works. great job.
| Lord Sia chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
The Epic Awesomeness of this... Xander, the Last Samurai... Sailor Moon, Destroyer of The World...
I. Need. More.
| Kumoatsu chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Secod best oneshot I have ever read, the best being a comedy for bleach that has the "King" of soul society being elvis presilly and beatinng aizen ad his croonies in five maybe six seconds.
| alaskan-dracolych chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
And you succinctly put to words what is wrong with the Sailor Moon universe. Granted, what I always rant about is the whole 'remove the darkness from man's heart' bit, but it is for the same reason that her spell caused the Great Freeze.
It was touching, man. Really. Not a single one OOC, least that I could tell.
| Kazegami chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
| shadow patronus chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
WOW! just WOW!
| Garnet Avi chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
That was strange. And super dark. An interesting interpretation, but the only quibble I'm going to make: how could Faith fight the senshi hand-to-hand, even briefly? I'm guessing short the Slayer mojo, she'd have to relearn her muscle control for fighting. I can see her having some moves that stuck with her, but the speed and reaction time? Even assuming she still remembered how to fight (mind or muscles), I always had the impression the senshi were magically strengthened, a bit like a Slayer, but maybe a little less. Still, stronger than a normal human. And I'm surprised their magic wouldn't make them more resistant to mundane weaponry (Sailor V did fight criminals, after all). But then, I guess your story wouldn't work?
| Willow-Bee the Cat chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
| Kodachi chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
Amazing, simply amazing. Very dark, and I hated to see some of my fave characters die, but it was a great story.