Reviews for The Nine Tailed Shark
SpencerDorman chapter 6 . 6/2
This Alcohol Elimination jutsu... is it canon or fan-made? I'd imagine that it's fan-made, as with just a few alterations/improvements, you could make a jutsu that would use chakra to seek out and eliminate poison from the bloodstream instead of alcohol. That's pretty overpowered, seeing as you're basically immune to poison from them on so long as you have usable chakra, and it doesn't seem all that special of a jutsu given the lack of reaction. I mean, if you can destroy alcohol in the body via chakra, then what's the big difference between that and destroying poison via chakra?
Monster King chapter 11 . 3/4
Shame that it looks like you gave up on the story but to be fair you did put it up for adoption.
Kairan1979 chapter 10 . 11/5/2016
Too bad the story wasn't updated.
No 1 chapter 11 . 9/23/2016
Splendergrrl chapter 11 . 8/12/2016
animezor chapter 7 . 8/9/2016
. why would we care about some hospital.
animezor chapter 6 . 8/9/2016
you wasted the story on deidara. you should have focused on naruto damnit.
Guest chapter 11 . 5/8/2016
Dame you darn you thay outto hang you from The highest tree!?
arinasution5 chapter 7 . 4/27/2016
Ryuu842 chapter 6 . 7/20/2015
Only Yamanaka's can do mind ninjutsus.
dragonriderluv chapter 11 . 4/25/2015
You tell me if this is been adopted and by who
Jose19 chapter 4 . 2/4/2015
I wonder will Naruto receive his legacy meaning learning the Rasengan, and the other stuff that Jiraiya was supposed to teach him but the problem I see is that the Shark summons will not aid Naruto in winning against the Akatsuki because he needs the power of Kurama, and to control Kurama you need the key to release him, and unfortunately it belongs to the Toad Summons so this problem has to be remedied because even with the skills of Kisame and his Sword he would be killed very easy by Madara and his henchmen remember how overpowered he really is.
Jose19 chapter 3 . 2/4/2015
I hope you give Naruto the Shadow Clone technique because no one is better in using this technique than him, and he has proven this time after time with all the opponents he has fought in the past, and it grants him benefits that only he can use.
Jose19 chapter 2 . 2/4/2015
I suggest that you don't take Naruto's dream of becoming Hokage away because he is a OC character if you take this dream away, and why should he follow his dream because he has a legacy to uphold, and it is his birthright to become a Hokage.
Jose19 chapter 1 . 2/4/2015
I am shocked because the portrayal of Kisame is completely different of what he is in the canon but getting a hand of that Sword of his is great to see. The other thing is why haven't you updated this story more often because it is very interesting for any reader to follow.
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