|Reviews for Final Draft|
| TomRiddleMeThis chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
Oh shit, hahaha that was golden!
| S. Rune chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Awesome? Had to check your username to make sure you are not in fact AngelBuff4eva. ;)
| clandestinequeen chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Cute, very cute. I like your Angelus characterization and the baffled, david or not moment. Lmao! "Be wise revise!" - Brilliant motto! 5*
| spangelbanger chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
:) I like it. Though I have trouble picturing Angelus as a grammar nazi, That seems more William the bloody territory, but you did great.
| Angelus The Scourge of Europe chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Very good. It was quite entertaining. You had Angelus' character down. What I wouldn't give for a meeting with him (even though I'd most likely die, it would be a great way to go). And what was funny was as soon as I finished someone knocked on my dorm room door. I was disappointed. It was not Angelus.
Great work and I will be looking forward to reading more by you.
| Angel-Buffy17 chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
Wonderful and very realistic! I agree with Angelus: bad grammer is truly evil! For all us fanfic writers, "Be wise, Revise."
| The Van Animal chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
I love this story because it made me feel like Angelus was behind me the whole time I was reading.(Very Creepy!) While this story is a-m-a-z-i-n-g and well written, I can't help myself from feeling bad for the girl. I wish that it had been Angel at the door and not Angelus. I want to save her myself or better yet maybe team Angel could barge in and restore his soul at the last moment. I am not naive to the world of Angelus. I know of the legend and the pain he caused against humanity. I am just a little old fashioned and rather enjoy a story where the girl is saved after looking death straight in the face (of Angelus).
P.S. I want more to Read ASAP, you are very talented at the art of painting the picture for the reader. I seriously felt like I was trapped while reading this story.
| jasoncinema chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
When dealing with vampire lore, there are two things that I seek out when reading vampire fiction: the way with which a character deals with being turned into a vampire and the second is seeing a vampire suffer no compunction for taking a life indiscriminately.
This story is classic Angelus. Your ability to paint imaginative vistas with your wit and wordplay is terrific, a true testament to your talent and then some.
I can't wait to read your next story. Keep up the great work! :)