Reviews for Spontaneous Acts
kingslayers chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Was really sweet :)
AnonymousM chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
I tell my friends that they're not spontaneous enough all the time :D

I liked this. 'Nuf said.
Daisy Dollop chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Good job on the plot idea (though I'd suggest adding more detail and making the story as a whole longer), it's not something I've read yet and so I liked it.

You have some good material here, but I feel this story needs more attention. There was one spelling mistake, and it read a bit fast. I'd suggest getting a beta to look this over, because the idea is pretty good and you have parts I quite enjoyed.