|Reviews for Scattering Thoughts|
| controlled climb chapter 1 . 9/24/2010
Nummy is right :o
I love how you portrayed time passing with how he looks (... phwoooar!)
It's great that he still remembers her after so much time! And how she conveniently forgets about his Veela blood and totally falls for him... yummeh xD
YET ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL POEM, M'DEAR.
Loves it :)
| Morghen chapter 1 . 9/24/2010
I loved Lav's reactions to seeing Louis over the years. They were perfect. I know I've said this in all of my reviews, but I would reallyreallyreally love to read more about this couple - like how Louis wooed her or something. I think that this pairing has A LOT of potential. They could be the next Vicnev or something!
I loved this part:
"as he somehow chats you up &
you find yourself the prey,
no longer the predator"