|Reviews for Swords in Back Alleys|
| general zargon chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
LOL, a great one-shot, both action-y and just suspenseful enough at the end to have me hoping that there's a sequel. :) I love this series, and I hope you write more for it! Please keep up the great work! :)
| Melethril chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Thank you very much for continuing (or rather, filling in) Vathara's Clean and White universe. I hope you'll write another one-shot for this crossover sometime in the future because the entire setting is a wonderfully great idea.
I didn't know Bleach for a long time, but through Vathara's stories got into the fandom. While I only get short glimpes in your two one-shots, the characters sound true and very interesting.
The Kenshin you write is really great, too, his instincts/or Ki-sense, whatever you want to call it, his way of talking and slight exasperation at being called young (given he was a slight, red-haired, young teenage kid with near feminine looks in the midst of grown man must have left some sort of sensitivity on the subject) all seem in character.
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
Mostly setup, but no reason it couldn't fit the timeline. *claps* And it looks like we found out where Ichigo gets his utter lack of reiatsu sensitivity. Seriously, how did he miss two captains?
| mri chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
Just one question: If Isshin is the captain of the 9th division as of 1899 in the timeline (SiBA) and he was already a captain by 1878 (CaW), which division was he captain of then (CaW)? Kensei is listed as the captain of the 9th during Turn Back the Pendulum. The only positions I could deduce he was from in the manga was 10th or 11th.
Other than that, it was a very good job.
| Vathara chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
Isshin has been pulling the Crouching Moron Hidden Badass act a long, long time... Heh! And I bet Juushirou and Shunsui aren't fooled, either!