Reviews for Good Morning
Amine-is-my-AWESOME chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
short but not a bad story. liked it!
Chazzyheartslexi chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
Awww! Kawaii! This was soooo adorable! I loved it. Please write more! :)
Sayoko Bizen chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
Too many run-on sentences. One idea per sentence, please. I think you were going for a soft and gentle fiction piece, so chop the sentences up and put solid images into their own sentences. Run-on sentences work best in fiction where you want to evoke quickness in action, like action scenes or even sex. Not for this one, though. Happy writing! :)
eclst chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
For a drabble this was really cute -