|Reviews for The Deal|
| PastOneonta chapter 5 . 11/12/2016
Neal was brave and determined to save Peter, risking his own life. I was certain he was badly hurt. This was nice, thanks for writing.
| Dramajunkie3066 chapter 5 . 7/25/2013
oh this is sweet i love it :)
| BlueDiamondStar chapter 5 . 11/20/2012
WOW so cute.
I think my eyes would have fallen out of their sockets if I was Neal xD
| JackiLeigh chapter 5 . 9/14/2012
"Without another word Candy skipped pleasantly from the room and took a left, going back to whatever fairy tale she'd fallen out of." I absolutely LOVED this line, too funny. Enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing.
| ferryboat George chapter 5 . 3/9/2012
aww, how sweet. Loved the bit about the badge, I love that badge :)
| caffrey girl chapter 5 . 10/19/2011
Nice story. Loved it. The whump was just enough to be nice
| huge sg1 fan chapter 5 . 2/19/2011
i loved the line about the best firend. how sweet. good story. :)
| spookysister7 chapter 5 . 1/29/2011
aw. so cute
| minitha chapter 5 . 12/13/2010
this review is for all the chapters!
WOW! this is just freakin awesome!
I love it! the way you manage to make it so casual, and yet so serious...you've got real talent in you!
Keep it up!
| csimesser1 chapter 5 . 9/30/2010
that was great loved it
| MaraudingSnitch1314 chapter 5 . 9/4/2010
What a sweet ending! Love the reference to Vital Signs's "regular Kodak moment," Great work!
| ghostdolly chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
sweetest chapter ever! so sugary I almost had a diabetic reaction *LOL* Loved this story. It had whump, it was mellow and it was wonderful. I enjoyed it all the way through!
Thanks for sharing your story with the rabid fans!
| kleptomaniac chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
this was so cute! i can just imagine the surprised look on Neal's face when Peter called him his best friend. i love how you incorporated the plastic sheriff badge into your story. great job!
| Missy92 chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
awwwwwww A kodak moment Indeed
| RascalFlattsS chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
Aw...cuteness! That was such a cute ending! Great job!