Reviews for The Deal
PastOneonta chapter 5 . 11/12/2016
Neal was brave and determined to save Peter, risking his own life. I was certain he was badly hurt. This was nice, thanks for writing.
Dramajunkie3066 chapter 5 . 7/25/2013
oh this is sweet i love it :)
BlueDiamondStar chapter 5 . 11/20/2012
WOW so cute.
I think my eyes would have fallen out of their sockets if I was Neal xD
Good story
JackiLeigh chapter 5 . 9/14/2012
"Without another word Candy skipped pleasantly from the room and took a left, going back to whatever fairy tale she'd fallen out of." I absolutely LOVED this line, too funny. Enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing.
ferryboat George chapter 5 . 3/9/2012
aww, how sweet. Loved the bit about the badge, I love that badge :)
caffrey girl chapter 5 . 10/19/2011
Nice story. Loved it. The whump was just enough to be nice
huge sg1 fan chapter 5 . 2/19/2011
i loved the line about the best firend. how sweet. good story. :)
spookysister7 chapter 5 . 1/29/2011
aw. so cute
minitha chapter 5 . 12/13/2010
this review is for all the chapters!

WOW! this is just freakin awesome!

I love it! the way you manage to make it so casual, and yet so've got real talent in you!

Keep it up!
csimesser1 chapter 5 . 9/30/2010
that was great loved it
MaraudingSnitch1314 chapter 5 . 9/4/2010
What a sweet ending! Love the reference to Vital Signs's "regular Kodak moment," Great work!
ghostdolly chapter 5 . 9/2/2010

sweetest chapter ever! so sugary I almost had a diabetic reaction *LOL* Loved this story. It had whump, it was mellow and it was wonderful. I enjoyed it all the way through!

Thanks for sharing your story with the rabid fans!
kleptomaniac chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
this was so cute! i can just imagine the surprised look on Neal's face when Peter called him his best friend. i love how you incorporated the plastic sheriff badge into your story. great job!
Missy92 chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
awwwwwww A kodak moment Indeed
RascalFlattsS chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
Aw...cuteness! That was such a cute ending! Great job!

60 | Page 1 2 3 .. Last Next »