Reviews for Thoughts of Us
MelancholyMami chapter 20 . 3/14/2014
this story is OUSTANDING. kudos!
RupturedRose chapter 20 . 11/18/2012
I'll be honest. I cried at the end. Great fic. Great writing. Definitely getting put in my favorites.
Jimmy Geist chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
i want to go for saying this isn't for Chapter 1 this is an opinion for like the whole story i read all of it in like one day! I loveddddd it man. if it were a dude i'd have it's babies33 Awesome OFC , nice dialouge, the people were in character everything was awesome! Sex scene would've jut been top notch but it held it's on without it! Unf..
shoeychocolatXD chapter 17 . 7/12/2011
best line ever

the Fuhrer isn't going to kill himself, is he?"

its funny, ironic and funny
Nova Rhea9d3 chapter 20 . 3/23/2011
"I know, Donny. Come on, if we don't get to the table, your Nana will use that bat on all of us."

LOL oh Nana. :)
klutzygal12 chapter 20 . 3/23/2011
Oh lord, you made me cry.

I really enjoyed this story. I hope to hear more from you!
VampireGleek chapter 20 . 3/21/2011
Awww how sad but it's a great ending! You should write another donny/oc story mabye one where he doesn't die?
Eleana128 chapter 18 . 3/15/2011
I'm really enjoying your story. Josie is such a kick-ass character, i really like her. Look forward to an update.
misssixty1 chapter 2 . 12/27/2010
This is just lovely.
Steph chapter 14 . 11/1/2010
I really like this story. I hope you don't decide to have Donny die like he does in the movie hah
stankface chapter 11 . 9/23/2010
Cute. Sorry I didn't review sooner. I never got the alert that this was updated. Great chapter though.
stankface chapter 9 . 9/12/2010
Of course I like it. I like that Donny has pretty much claimed Josie as his and I also like that she initiates things. It's really cute.
typhoidcandy chapter 8 . 9/9/2010
Great chapter. Hope to read more soon.
stankface chapter 8 . 9/9/2010
I'm really bad a sex scenes too, so I can't help you there, but I will tell you that I liked this chapter. I too wouldn't be able to stomach that sound. I'm glad Josie's getting the hang of things
typhoidcandy chapter 7 . 9/6/2010
Short chapter but it was great. I really like where this story is going.
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