Reviews for Aberration
kevinthegoat0304 chapter 20 . 12/2
Haaaa how are gonna leave us on a itachi cliff hanger? So cruel.
kevinthegoat0304 chapter 14 . 12/1
Jiraya doesn’t appear until the chunin exams because he was busy investigating
kevinthegoat0304 chapter 13 . 12/1
A class missing nin. Major difference. Zabuza ain’t S class by a mile. Kakashi is closer to S.
kevinthegoat0304 chapter 12 . 12/1
Was wondering when ayame would show up lol. He is like the same age as itachi at the start of naruto
kevinthegoat0304 chapter 11 . 12/1
A few nitpicks I have about the timeline in the beginning tho. Naruto met the hokage at around age 5. He also got an apartment at the same age. The hokage regularly checks up on naruto about once a week. The uchiha massacre happened when naruto and assume were around 7-8. Also no one ever laid a finger on naruto in the canonical story, but I get that you added it for story purposes. Good work so far tho
kevinthegoat0304 chapter 10 . 12/1
The kakashi rae dynamic is so great.
kevinthegoat0304 chapter 10 . 12/1
This is way less serious and is way more entertaining than most stories. A few nitpicks I have about the timeline in the beginning tho. Naruto met the hokage at around age 5-6. He also got an apartment at the same age. The hokage regularly checks up on naruto about once a week. The uchiha massacre happened when naruto and assume were around 7-8. Also no one ever laid a finger on naruto in the canonical story, but I get that you added it for story purposes. Good work so far tho
ChojisGirl2 chapter 20 . 11/30
I only just found this story two days ago and I love it. I know it's been years since it was updated, but please please please update this story. I want to know what happens next!
Hitori no kage chapter 20 . 11/2
Hey Rin! Just wanted to say as a fellow writer that I've lost count of how many times I've reread this story over the last 7 years. Desperately missing you and your wonderful story telling! Hope you can update us on how you're doing and whether you'll be continuing this story- I really really really hope you are! Can't wait for you to come back! :D
youhateme chapter 7 . 11/2
When ever I picture Rae I see the main female character form the nextflix show inside job.
youhateme chapter 3 . 11/2
I am on chapter 3 rn, and I love this story so far. Sad to see it stops at 20 and it’s hasn’t been updated for awhile. Hope you come back to this one day
Daydream3198 chapter 20 . 10/16
Rin O' Gen I want to tell you what my fellow fans and I hope you already know, you are an amazing author who has created a truly great story and OC, I am truly grateful to have read it and to know of you and her.

I would like to humbly ask for an update on you and to know if you are alright, Im sure my fellow fans would also find it reassuring.

Thank you for creating something that brought joy to so many including myself, best wishes
Hyperman15 chapter 1 . 10/13
Thank you for this wonderful story. I don’t regret reading this one bit even if it hasn’t been updated for the past 7 years. I hope you are doing well in any case.

Fanfics like this one make me want to write my own fics
Hyperman15 chapter 4 . 10/11
Of course she reads Icha Icha, Jiraiya is the closest thing to a fanfic writer in Naruto
Jamaican Printessa chapter 20 . 9/12
NOOOOOO! I can't believe you ended when Itachi was gonna make an appearance (‵′)︵ ! And now you're never gonna come back to update... (;༎ຶД༎ຶ)
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