Reviews for In a Split Moment
PinkAmy chapter 11 . 1/14
I LOVED THE CHAPTER. I LOVED THE STORY. I LOVED EVERYTHING.
Whale, until next story,
STAY GOLD XD.
Zayhad chapter 11 . 12/27/2012
i loved this story indeed. sadly i was a bit sad about the "epic fail part" since this is the 60's and as far as i remember they dont use epic fail words :P
but all in all.. simple fantastic. I injoyed reading this story
thebutterfliesarewilting chapter 11 . 2/28/2012
Super original story. Nice idea. I like this.

Stay Gold

Layla
Georgia loves Johnny Cade chapter 11 . 2/23/2012
Oh my god this made me cry it is the sweetest story ever I give it two thumbs up! It was so well written man u got talent :) amazing absolutely amazing :)
Cirruz The Night Elf chapter 11 . 10/29/2011
AW! I LOVE THIS STORY!
Aihoshi chapter 11 . 7/18/2011
Cute rendition of the "what if" of this novel.

Besides the occasional typos, I only have one complaint: the boys seem very out of character saying "heck" and "dang" all the time, especially Dally. He, at least, would go all out and swear for real.
blackdawn0 chapter 11 . 5/22/2011
great story. but some advice, if you have a comma at a end of a sentence, put it inside of the quotations. but that's it. great job.

Dawn
power of darkness chapter 5 . 9/14/2010
very nice :)

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power of darkness chapter 4 . 9/14/2010
very good sweety :)

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power of darkness chapter 3 . 9/13/2010
interesting :)

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power of darkness chapter 2 . 9/13/2010
well that was short but alas i forgive you :)

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power of darkness chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
its allright so far :)

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Phoenixx Rising chapter 11 . 9/3/2010
loved it! thanks!
CBloom2 chapter 11 . 9/2/2010
Nice ending! Good job!
PartyInTheBackBuisnessUpFront chapter 9 . 9/1/2010
more! more! more!...please D
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