|Reviews for Kathleen vs The Protruding Screw|
| molbymagic chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
This story is great! I love learning about how Alex and Kathleen got together! And what will the 'protruding screw' to to the story? :)
| ms.chipsgmail.com chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
Mmmmm, Alex, indeed! That was lovely and it really hit the spot (so to speak). I would love to see more of Alex and Kathleen's relationship. We've seen her POV here, so perhaps something from Alex's perspective next? We know so little about them from that interrupted phone call (damn that Col. Keller!) that I do want to know what they were like as a couple. And then there are the moments leading up to that phone call and after, when she found out that Alex had been killed in action. I think there's a lot of material there, and based on this first segment, I'm sure you'll do them justice.
Thanks for sharing this with us!