Reviews for Private Production
EdeatheDemonFox chapter 1 . 10/20
This was hot. Holy...And Lightning's sassy attitude toward the end...I'm with Snow. They should just skip the second act. XD This was truly a delight to read. Not just the lemon (and Vanille finding them - that was so hilarious!) but everything in general was worded so well.~
Bree chapter 1 . 1/13
I've re-read this delectable fic quite a few times now 3
Bree chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
Soo good! I concur, snow's definitely a giver. But I bet he's a taker as well ;) in the good sense, of course. This was such a delicious, well-written read. I want more! Lightning teasing him a bit at the end *faints* yessss!
Pirkam-Powder-Pie chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
These two need to go on Newlyweds 8D
Gerkyhen chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
So hot. Snow and oral sex is always the BEST. Loved it.
Katherine chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
Will you write a follow-up for what happens after the opera? Pretty please? D

NoctisxNiveus chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
I liked this alot, Very very sexy ;D

I think LightxSnow would have been a very humorus couple but damn it they had to create Serah. but thats what Fanfics are for right?

Love Ringo
Knuczema chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Why dosnt this have more reviews?

This is excellent! Very sexy. I absolutly LOVE how you portray as an attentive lover. It suits him so well. And to me no matter what you write you always keep them in character. I could see that
brainfear chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
Wow! Amazing! Why did Vanille ruin the moment? Argh!
Supermel Returns chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
You definitely got it right when you said "lemony-scented"! There was just enough romance to wet my whistle, but not enough to make it a full blown lemon. But, of course, I do applaud you! I enjoy all of your work, and this is just as good as the rest of them. The writing was superb, and that sometimes can be difficult when writing smut. You definitely know how to make a lemon tasteful and not just smut! :D

I truly hope there is a sequel to this... of act two. ;P
Bookgirl1980 chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
A great one shot, love it that they are together and can't get enough of each other.